I think you should find a why to make his solitary nature important to the logline. If he doesn’t trust people, does that push him to do this by himself? Does he form a special bond with his clone despite his reclusive nature?
I think you should just say ‘cloned’ as in a previous version of your logline. Or focus more on the 3d printer and say something like “when he accidently creates a sentient being from a 3d printer…” and then you would be able to link that to the antagonist’s goal more clearly “a dodgy business man wants to get ahold of the clone to find out how he did it” or some such. Because obviously we don’t have 3d printed people running amok as of now.

For the logline I’m not exactly sure why him converting to Islam is important, it doesn’t seem to be an actually inciting incident, just a situation the character is in. “Life thrown into chaos” is too vague.
It seems that the MC finding out the mentor is a terrorist is the true inciting incident.
My suggestion: When his mentor puts him on a train with a bomb, a young Muslim must find a way to disarm it before it destroys half the city.
You don’t really state any real goal for the MC. Does he want to save just himself or is his concerned with other people’s lives? The two situations could create different circumstances. For example, if the bomb were a bomb that went off when the train stopped, would the MC try to disarm it? Create a clear goal.