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While shooting their first music video, a local metal band on the rise quickly realizes that the urban legend surrounding their filming location is true: When people enter, they don?t exit.
Ant then what? The logline sets up a situation for a plot.? But it doesn't follow through with a plot. Suggest checking out the guidelines for writing an industry acceptable logline.
Ant then what?
The logline sets up a situation for a plot.? But it doesn’t follow through with a plot.
Suggest checking out the guidelines for writing an industry acceptable logline.
See lessPresent day: After his mother is accidentally killed during a father-son quarrel, a young martial artist must find his long-lost uncle – to explain his mother’s dying words, while he is relentlessly pursued by his father, a martial arts master who has vowed to kill him.
I still have no idea what the stakes are in delivering the message.? Why the message matters.By stakes, I means it's not enough that the boy finds some kind of absolution, penance for his guilt, compensation for his remorse, by successfully delivering the message.? The father also needs to have stakRead more
I still have no idea what the stakes are in delivering the message.? Why the message matters.
By stakes, I means it’s not enough that the boy finds some kind of absolution, penance for his guilt, compensation for his remorse, by successfully delivering the message.? The father also needs to have stakes in the message.
The message must contain either information that poses a mortal threat to the father;? or it contains information the father covets for his own nefarious purpose.? Or both.
IOW: the content of the message should be a kind of a McGuffin — something all the major characters desperately want, that all have a personal stake in.
The logline doesn’t indicate that the father wants to kill the son BECAUSE of the content of the message and its intended recipient, that he has any stakes in the message at all.? The logline only says the father wants him dead.? What does the father have to lose if the son succeeds in delivering the message?
Consider the movie “1917”.?? Two soldiers must race against time to deliver a message to stop 1,600 men from walking straight into a deadly trap.? Unambiguous high stakes for all involved.? And the stakes are personal, too.? One of the 1,600 is a soldier’s brother.
See lessPresent day: After his mother is accidentally killed during a father-son quarrel, a young martial artist must find his long-lost uncle – to explain his mother’s dying words, while he is relentlessly pursued by his father, a martial arts master who has vowed to kill him.
I can see what the stakes are in terms of saving his own life, but what are the stakes in explaining his mother's dying words?? Why MUST he not only live but explain??? What is lost if he lives but never gets the chance to explain?
I can see what the stakes are in terms of saving his own life, but what are the stakes in explaining his mother’s dying words?? Why MUST he not only live but explain??? What is lost if he lives but never gets the chance to explain?
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