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  1. Posted: April 8, 2018In: Comedy

    Edited: When an seasoned womanizer transforms his female best friend from a clinger to a player and finds himself attracted to his new creation, but realizes the repercussions of his teachings is worst than he imagined.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 9, 2018 at 12:34 pm

    Well said Valentin.? I agree with you on ever point.? Especially on the point about the temper of the times in the movie industry, the #MeToo and #TimesUp movements.? It's time to flip the trope, the Pygmalion? plot, so that it's a woman who gives a man a make over, transforms him into a player.

    Well said Valentin.? I agree with you on ever point.? Especially on the point about the temper of the times in the movie industry, the #MeToo and #TimesUp movements.?

    It’s time to flip the trope, the Pygmalion? plot, so that it’s a woman who gives a man a make over, transforms him into a player.

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  2. Posted: April 9, 2018In: Drama

    Does my logline work, is it clear and show the character, event, and action.

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    Added an answer on April 9, 2018 at 2:40 am

    What's the difference between a "so called Dad" and a real one? And as variable pointed out, she needs a specific objective goal.? "....overcome prejudice and ignorant stereotypes." is general, nonspecific.? ? The overcoming needs to be translated into a specific game plan.? Exactly how does she proRead more

    What’s the difference between a “so called Dad” and a real one?

    And as variable pointed out, she needs a specific objective goal.? “….overcome prejudice and ignorant stereotypes.” is general, nonspecific.? ? The overcoming needs to be translated into a specific game plan.? Exactly how does she propose to win her peers acceptance and respect?

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  3. Posted: April 8, 2018In: Comedy

    Edited: When an seasoned womanizer transforms his female best friend from a clinger to a player and finds himself attracted to his new creation, but realizes the repercussions of his teachings is worst than he imagined.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on April 8, 2018 at 10:37 pm

    How about something like:On a bet, a charming womanizer accepts the challenge to transform a clinger into player only to have her play his heart when he falls in love with his creation. (30 words)"Only to have"? = ironic and unintentional role reversal (and poetic pay back): the player who manipulatRead more

    How about something like:

    On a bet, a charming womanizer accepts the challenge to transform a clinger into player only to have her play his heart when he falls in love with his creation.
    (30 words)

    “Only to have”? = ironic and unintentional role reversal (and poetic pay back): the player who manipulates women’s hearts gets? his own heart manipulated by his creation.

    “On a bet” = the inciting incident.? Gotta have a reason why he? would deign to invest his time, effort and “human relationship” expertise on a woman whom he would initially have no respect for, no interest in.

    fwiw

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