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  1. Posted: March 26, 2018In: Examples

    The true story of how a notorious Jewish counterfeiter saved his life by cooperating with the Nazis in the largest counterfeiting scheme in history.

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    Added an answer on April 3, 2018 at 1:00 pm

    >>>>The true story of how a Jewish counterfeiter trades his services for freedom from the Nazi war machine. Except it's not a trade in terms that he's free to walk away from the scheme.? He has no choice:? It's help the Nazi's or go to the gas chambers.? It's do or die.? And freedom is nRead more

    >>>>The true story of how a Jewish counterfeiter trades his services for freedom from the Nazi war machine.

    Except it’s not a trade in terms that he’s free to walk away from the scheme.? He has no choice:? It’s help the Nazi’s or go to the gas chambers.? It’s do or die.? And freedom is not an option as a carrot dangled out in front of him..? The best he can hope for is to? merely survival from one day to the next — for as long as the Nazis need his skills.

    Of course, he does gain (not win) his freedom.? Thanks to the Allies defeating Germany, not because of Nazis beneficence.

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  2. Posted: March 30, 2018In: Comedy

    After learning about their spouse’s college fling, two unhappily married lovers plot their reunion only to encounter hopeless loyalty

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    Added an answer on March 31, 2018 at 10:20 pm

    Re: >>> ... attempt to make their unwaveringly loyal spouses fall in love with each other?I think Richiev's version is good enough.? "Unwavering" is what is? discovered as a consequence of trying to match them up with others.How do you know that someone is "unwavering" about anything?? YouRead more

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    >>> … attempt to make their unwaveringly loyal spouses fall in love with each other?

    I think Richiev’s version is good enough.? “Unwavering” is what is? discovered as a consequence of trying to match them up with others.

    How do you know that someone is “unwavering” about anything?? You know only because you challenge them, tempt them, test their commitment.? You can’t say someone is unwavering until their position or relationship is put to the test.? And that test doesn’t occur until Act 2.? But a logline is about the knowledge the protagonists act upon in the 1st Act, not what they come to realize by Act 3.

    If they knew that their spouses were “unwavering” in Act 1, they would have never tried their scheme.? They try their scheme because they don’t know, because they have (flimsy or fanciful) grounds to believe they can pull it off.

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: March 30, 2018In: Adventure

    waking up dead to realize his victims now hunting for him, a bounty hunter must work with the only guy grateful-to-be-dead, in order to reach NIRVANA INC. (also possible title)

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    Added an answer on March 31, 2018 at 7:30 am

    >>>and after I remove ?bounty? from the logline it falls apart, since why would anyone root for this hunter character, with so many victims??What if he's a serial murderer?Or a serial rapist?? IAnd all the victims seeking revenge are women.)

    >>>and after I remove ?bounty? from the logline it falls apart, since why would anyone root for this hunter character, with so many victims??

    What if he’s a serial murderer?

    Or a serial rapist?? IAnd all the victims seeking revenge are women.)

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