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Revised: After her children are taken, on account of her mental illness, a holier-than-though mother must reclaim them, by undergoing a life-threatening VR therapy: defeating embodiments of her demons in simulated combat.
>>>on account of her mental illness, a holier-than-though mother What dramatic purpose is served by her being "holier-than-thou"?? She's already mentally ill.? Isn't that enough?
>>>on account of her mental illness, a holier-than-though mother
What dramatic purpose is served by her being “holier-than-thou”?? She’s already mentally ill.? Isn’t that enough?
See lessThe true story of how a notorious Jewish counterfeiter saved his life by cooperating with the Nazis in the largest counterfeiting scheme in history.
>>>(for the sake of an inciting incident)Tempting because the inciting incident is so deliciously ironic: the man who busted him for counterfeiting in 1936 is the man who recruits him to counterfeit in 1943.But, again, I decided the hook was so strong that it wasn't necessary.
>>>(for the sake of an inciting incident)
Tempting because the inciting incident is so deliciously ironic: the man who busted him for counterfeiting in 1936 is the man who recruits him to counterfeit in 1943.
But, again, I decided the hook was so strong that it wasn’t necessary.
See lessThe true story of how a notorious Jewish counterfeiter saved his life by cooperating with the Nazis in the largest counterfeiting scheme in history.
Excellent question, variable.? In my rough draft, I inserted the detail of the concentration camp.? But I decided it was unnecessary, the story hook is enough to bait interest.?And in my calculus, the hook is the most important element of a logline.? A logline's primary job is? to hook people into rRead more
Excellent question, variable.? In my rough draft, I inserted the detail of the concentration camp.? But I decided it was unnecessary, the story hook is enough to bait interest.?
And in my calculus, the hook is the most important element of a logline.? A logline’s primary job is? to hook people into reading the script, not inform.
The hook certainly grabbed my attention, made me want to see the movie.? Mission accomplished.? (It’s one of my favorite movies.? An excellent example of plotting and character. I highly recommend it.)
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