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  1. Posted: May 29, 2016In: SciFi

    A time-traveling hitman wakes up in his next hit anytime he sleeps. When he learns of a remedy that cures fatigue, he betrays the mob in search of their mad-scientist’s invention.

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    Added an answer on May 30, 2016 at 12:47 pm

    For me the hook is a time traveling hit man. ?But I'm not entirely sold on the logic that follows from that premise for the plot described in this logline.Killing other people is his job, his profession and sleep is the way he moves on from job to the next. ?So why would he want to eliminate the meaRead more

    For me the hook is a time traveling hit man. ?But I’m not entirely sold on the logic that follows from that premise for the plot described in this logline.

    Killing other people is his job, his profession and sleep is the way he moves on from job to the next. ?So why would he want to eliminate the means that enables him ?to move on to his next hit, his next pay day? ?And what is at stake?

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  2. Posted: May 29, 2016In: Drama

    When a black 10 yr old boy?s father is abducted in apartheid South Africa he must use his lucid dreams to free his father and seek refuge in Australia.

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    Added an answer on May 30, 2016 at 7:58 am

    I would prefer him to prevail by dint of his wits, resourcefulness and courage without the recourse to "magic", in this case, some kind of prescience through second sight lucid dreams. ?(As I am a lucid dreamer, I am well aware of its allure -- and limits to its application in real life.)But it's yoRead more

    I would prefer him to prevail by dint of his wits, resourcefulness and courage without the recourse to “magic”, in this case, some kind of prescience through second sight lucid dreams. ?(As I am a lucid dreamer, I am well aware of its allure — and limits to its application in real life.)

    But it’s your story.

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  3. Posted: May 28, 2016In: Drama

    It?s the late 1970?s in apartheid Sth Africa, when an intuitive 10yr old boy?s father is abducted, the family seek political asylum in Australia or face further persecution, the boy is determined to find his father and together with an unlikely ally, speaks to his dreams to find the answers before it?s too late.

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    Added an answer on May 29, 2016 at 5:55 am

    In the apartheid era of South Africa, a ten year old boy must rescue his abducted father so the whole family can flee to Australia.(25 words)

    In the apartheid era of South Africa, a ten year old boy must rescue his abducted father so the whole family can flee to Australia.

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