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WHEN A YOUNG SKATER IS THREATENED WITH EVICTION, HE TURNS TO HIS RAG TAG GROUP OF FRIENDS TO HELP HIM PULL OFF A YUPPIE HEIST TO END THEM ALL. (CA$H)
I think by "to end them all" he means "the heists to end all heists"-- the biggest one of all.? Unfortunately, that's a?vague dramatic promise for a logline.???it needs to be more specific?. ?What is the heist??? What exactly do they plan to do?? Show me the money!???What makes this one so awesome?Read more
I think by “to end them all” he means “the heists to end all heists”– the biggest one of all.? Unfortunately, that’s a?vague dramatic promise for a logline.???it needs to be more specific?. ?What is the heist??? What exactly do they plan to do?? Show me the money!???What makes this one so awesome? — and risky — that I just gotta read the script to find out how they pull it off?
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"There are only two or three human stories, and they go on repeating themselves as fiercely as if they had never happened before." -- Willa CatherThe challenge is to come up with?novel??variations and twists.
“There are only two or three human stories, and they go on repeating themselves as fiercely as if they had never happened before.”
— Willa Cather
The challenge is to come up with?novel??variations and twists.
See lessWhen his son, the only heir to the farm, confesses that he wants to become a photo-journalist instead, a burnt out lonely father must regain his own stubborn father?s trust in order to receive an inheritance that could save his cancer ridden wife?s life.
I note you've struggled through several iterations of?your story.? The common denominators seems to be a son who doesn't want to farm pitted against a?grandfather damn well intent on keep?his male?offspring on the farm. That?chain?of causal connectivity seems to be?broken in this version.? Now thereRead more
I note you’ve struggled through several iterations of?your story.? The common denominators seems to be a son who doesn’t want to farm pitted against a?grandfather damn well intent on keep?his male?offspring on the farm.
That?chain?of causal connectivity seems to be?broken in this version.? Now there seems to be 2 distinct?stories with two?non-converging objective goals: ?1] a son who wants to fly the coop, pursue a career in photography.; 2] A father who needs his father’s inheritance to? pay for his wife’s cancer treatment.
What is the unifying factor that ties these two stories into one?
I don’t what to say.?? Other than to ask: what exactly, stripped down to the core, is the ONE story you really, really, really?want to tell.? What is the dramatic itch you are trying to scratch?
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