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  1. Posted: March 23, 2016In: Drama

    After she barely survives a suicide attempt, a teenager, believing death is the best solution, records her experiences on her transformative journey to reclaim her life.

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    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 24, 2016 at 1:38 am

    "Believing death is the best solution" I presume is the explanatory motivation for the suicide attempt.? But I think that goes without saying -- why else would people attempt suicide if they didn't think that suicide was the best solution, the only option left??? So, perhaps it's redundant to say soRead more

    “Believing death is the best solution” I presume is the explanatory motivation for the suicide attempt.? But I think that goes without saying — why else would people attempt suicide if they didn’t think that suicide was the best solution, the only option left??? So, perhaps it’s redundant to say so.

    “Recording her experiences, et cetera….” is too general for an objective goal.? Her “transformative journey” needs to entail a specific objective goal she struggles for as a result of surviving? the suicide attempt.? (And looming in the story is the threat she’ll try suicide again if she fails or the stress of the struggle becomes unbearable.? People who survive a suicide attempt are at high risk of trying again.)

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  2. Posted: March 23, 2016In: SciFi

    Home Invasion – A brilliant engineer and his family get trapped in their home when his highly sophisticated, prototype security device goes rogue.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 24, 2016 at 1:25 am

    I presume the objective goal is that he needs to? escape.????So:As days pass and food runs out, an eccentric?engineer, trapped?at home, and cut off from all outside communication by a security system he invented, must defeat his own ingenuity before he and his family?starve to death. (39 words)AwkwaRead more

    I presume the objective goal is that he needs to? escape.????So:

    As days pass and food runs out, an eccentric?engineer, trapped?at home, and cut off from all outside communication by a security system he invented, must defeat his own ingenuity before he and his family?starve to death.
    (39 words)

    Awkward, but fwiw.

    I like the irony, that the?main character has?been hoisted by his own engineering?petard.

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  3. Posted: March 23, 2016In: Thriller

    In The City – A dirty cop with a gambling debt he must pay off with 24 hours forces a fast-talking criminal to take him to a lockbox full of cash he claims is stashed somewhere in the city.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on March 23, 2016 at 10:24 pm

    Given that in the U.S. cops as a group have a serious public image problem, are widely despised and distrusted, why would an audience?lay?out $10-$12 and invest 90-120 minutes of their precious time in a story about ?a dirty one?What is there about this dirty cop that would induce them to see the moRead more

    Given that in the U.S. cops as a group have a serious public image problem, are widely despised and distrusted, why would an audience?lay?out $10-$12 and invest 90-120 minutes of their precious time in a story about ?a dirty one?

    What is there about this dirty cop that would induce them to see the movie, let alone?sympathize with his predicament, condone his methods, root for him to succeed??

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