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In an alternate Arabian fantasy world, when an ex-patriot assassin is forced by a corrupt Sheikh to kill a rival, he must choose between losing his fiance’s life, or killing an innocent man.
Why does it have to be set in an alternate Arabian fantasy world?? I? don't see anything special about the plot that requires it?? Why can't it take place in the real world?And as FFF noted, ?a logline about a difficult choice the protagonist faces comes down to an advertisement for one scene in a fRead more
Why does it have to be set in an alternate Arabian fantasy world?? I? don’t see anything special about the plot that requires it?? Why can’t it take place in the real world?
And as FFF noted, ?a logline about a difficult choice the protagonist faces comes down to an advertisement for one scene in a feature film rather than for the film in its totality.
And the ex-assassin is portrayed as a hapless. ?passive reactor:? he’s given 2 equally undesirable choices.? He’s being ordered to act out the sheikh’s plot.? What independent, defiant, ?proactive ?choice does he make to resolve the dilemma?? What?choice does he make?rather than?accept the choices??dictated to him by the sheikh?
?IOW:? what becomes his objective goal to thwart the sheikh’s objective goal?
See lessSex, drugs, and violence are controlled in the casino club the the CROWD CONTROL team. Fighting with the crowds is the best part of their job. But can they control themselves?
Yes, it reads more like a blurb than a logline.? Loglines imply dramatic questions? but?don't explicitly state them. And as noted, the logline lacks a?particular protagonist for the audience to identify with,.? And there is no??inciting incident.? And no ?clearly defined goal.? And it lacks a specifRead more
Yes, it reads more like a blurb than a logline.? Loglines imply dramatic questions? but?don’t explicitly state them.
And as noted, the logline lacks a?particular protagonist for the audience to identify with,.? And there is no??inciting incident.? And no ?clearly defined goal.? And it lacks a specific adversary or? problem that threatens to defeat the protagonist from achieving the ?goal.
See lessWhen a dying widower is approached by death with an offer, he must choose between donning the cowl, watching over his daughter or reconnecting with his love in the afterlife.
I think the widower's choice of goals needs clarification?.? What does "donning the cowl" signify in terms of?an intention or a goal? And? what ?does "watching over his daughter" mean and why?? Does??he want to?take care of her?or does?he NEED to ?take care of her?? Is she in danger of dying herselfRead more
I think the widower’s choice of goals needs clarification?.? What does “donning the cowl” signify in terms of?an intention or a goal?
And? what ?does “watching over his daughter” mean and why?? Does??he want to?take care of her?or does?he NEED to ?take care of her?? Is she in danger of dying herself?? If so, then he wouldn’t he be?reunited with her in the afterlife if he elects to “reconnect with his love in the afterlife”???(“Reconnect”?seems weak — reunite is stronger)? And won’t he be reunited with his daughter eventually in the afterlife?
And if he’s dying, then he’s?already on the way to being reunited with his love in the afterlife, isn’t he? ???So what’s the dramatic dilemma?? What really hard choice does he face?
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