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Paranoid and close to breaking a drug addicted army medic must survive a plot to get him killed after he discusses a friendly fire cover up.
If the protagonist is, indeed,?the target of an assassination plot, it's not paranoia --- it's a?fully justified, rational assessment of jeopardy.It seems to me that it's not enough?of a motivation for?the medic to be targeted because of what he knows.? Rather he's being targeted? because of what heRead more
If the protagonist is, indeed,?the target of an assassination plot, it’s not paranoia — it’s a?fully justified, rational assessment of jeopardy.
It seems to me that it’s not enough?of a motivation for?the medic to be targeted because of what he knows.? Rather he’s being targeted? because of what he knows and tells. ( To his superiors first, and then threatens to go to the?press when his superiors deny the incident, suppress the evidence.)? And?the latter case?would also?make him a more proactive character.
See lessOn the verge of capture, Vera, a peevish teenage Jew, flees the Nazi invasion of her Romanian village and crosses paths with a British secret service agent who reluctantly mentors her after she learns of her family?s murder. When her mentor is exposed as a double agent, she launches a vicious global vendetta to bring Nazi war criminals to justice before they can disappear into post-WWII hiding.
As Nir Shelter said.? The cause-and-effect relationship?doesn't seem?strong and clear enough.? Make it personal. She may?dedicate her life to finding and?bringing to justice former Nazis, but?she's?after one Nazi in particular, the one who was responsible for the death of her family.
As Nir Shelter said.? The cause-and-effect relationship?doesn’t seem?strong and clear enough.? Make it personal. She may?dedicate her life to finding and?bringing to justice former Nazis, but?she’s?after one Nazi in particular, the one who was responsible for the death of her family.
See lessA young mechanic discovers the spaceship she stole from dry dock is capable of ending the civil war between organic and synthetic life forms, but first she must convince the on-board AI to choose a side.
I don't entirely buy into the logic of the?logline.? It?seems to?advance a story line?where the woman really?doesn't care which side of the civil war the AI chooses, only that the AI make a choice.? But surely she herself?would favor one side or the other. ?And?she would be less than human if she diRead more
I don’t entirely buy into the logic of the?logline.? It?seems to?advance a story line?where the woman really?doesn’t care which side of the civil war the AI chooses, only that the AI make a choice.? But surely she herself?would favor one side or the other. ?And?she would be less than human if she didn’t try to ?persuade the AI to make the same choice. (Unless the Big Reveal is that she’s a synthetic life form.)
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