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When a former soldier’s young daughter is kidnapped, he will do everything in his power to take down those responsible to rescue her.
What?makes this new and different ?from the premise and protagonist of the "Taken"?franchise other than that in your story, the protagonist is an ?an ex-soldier rather than a retired CIA agent? ?That, alas, is the 1st question any Hollywood player who reads this logline is going to ask.
What?makes this new and different ?from the premise and protagonist of the “Taken”?franchise other than that in your story, the protagonist is an ?an ex-soldier rather than a retired CIA agent? ?That, alas, is the 1st question any Hollywood player who reads this logline is going to ask.
See lessA private investigator must uncover the truth behind the murder of a rich doctor in a remote country mansion, but is perplexed by stories of a Welsh phantom haunting the residence.
The private investigator needs to be more than "perplexed".? He needs to be threatened by inexplicable phenomena that suggest the stories aren't fables, but factual.? And who cares about the death of a rich doctor in a remote country mansion?? What at stake -- what is to be gained by the person whoRead more
The private investigator needs to be more than “perplexed”.? He needs to be threatened by inexplicable phenomena that suggest the stories aren’t fables, but factual.? And who cares about the death of a rich doctor in a remote country mansion?? What at stake — what is to be gained by the person who hired him if he solves the murder?
See lessAfter he?s hired on a potential bank fraud job,a budding young investigator discovers all clues lead to himself and must track down the impostor as his sworn enemy and former boss is hired on same.
When a bank examiner investigates a multi-billion dollar?financial fraud only to discover that all clues lead to himself, he must find the imposter before...before... before...? Before what happens?? I?think the logline needs to be spiked with?big stakes (multi-billion dollars) and a ?sense of imminRead more
When a bank examiner investigates a multi-billion dollar?financial fraud only to discover that all clues lead to himself, he must find the imposter before…before… before…?
Before what happens?? I?think the logline needs to be spiked with?big stakes (multi-billion dollars) and a ?sense of imminent jeopardy and?urgency.? What is the immediate threat to the bank?? And?to the protagonist? What is the worst thing that could happen and will happen if he doesn’t find and stop the real imposter NOW?
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