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  1. Posted: August 21, 2015In: Public

    When a jilted bachelorette seeking revenge accidentally hits a pedestrian, she refuses to forget her schemes, despite the fact the pedestrian is actually herself

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 21, 2015 at 11:29 pm

    I'm totally confused. The logline seems to setup a story about a character suffering a split personality. But I'm not sure. And if it is about a character with a split personality, I don't know what plot arises from that character flaw.

    I’m totally confused. The logline seems to setup a story about a character suffering a split personality. But I’m not sure. And if it is about a character with a split personality, I don’t know what plot arises from that character flaw.

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  2. Posted: August 20, 2015In: Public

    In a world run by machines, a timid young woman – holding a vital secret – must regain her ability to speak before everything she loves is destroyed.

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    Added an answer on August 21, 2015 at 6:55 am

    >>In a world run by machines As noted, I, too, fail to see how this has anything whatsoever to do with the rest of the story. >>>holding a vital secret Vague. A lot of movies are about a character with a vital secret. The logline should be specific. >>must regain her ability to speak before everythiRead more

    >>In a world run by machines

    As noted, I, too, fail to see how this has anything whatsoever to do with the rest of the story.

    >>>holding a vital secret

    Vague. A lot of movies are about a character with a vital secret. The logline should be specific.

    >>must regain her ability to speak before everything she loves is destroyed.

    The logline doesn’t give me a clue as to the nature of the cause and effect relationship between her loss of speech and losing everything she loves.

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  3. Posted: August 19, 2015In: Public

    A secretive, lonely hitman is asked to perform one last hit when he decides to quit after falling in love with a successful attorney. When the target turns out to be his intended, he must bring all of his skills to bear against everything the mob can throw at him.

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    Added an answer on August 20, 2015 at 1:25 pm

    Falling in love is the strongest motivation for retiring and the strongest motivation for wanting to risk all to save her life.

    Falling in love is the strongest motivation for retiring and the strongest motivation for wanting to risk all to save her life.

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