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A young street level dealer must navigate the mine field of gang culture to get out before the gang implodes in a bloody internal war.
What's the inciting incident that triggers his decision to get out? "Get out before the gang implodes" is anticipating trouble -- reacting to what he fears will happens. It's not a reaction to a specific event in the present tense, something that happens that motivates his decision. What is the specRead more
What’s the inciting incident that triggers his decision to get out? “Get out before the gang implodes” is anticipating trouble — reacting to what he fears will happens. It’s not a reaction to a specific event in the present tense, something that happens that motivates his decision.
What is the specific event, the inciting incident?
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What Lucius Paisley said. The logline is about the plot, the front story, not the backstory, and plot commences begins when he starts moonlighting as a Yakuza enforcer.
What Lucius Paisley said. The logline is about the plot, the front story, not the backstory, and plot commences begins when he starts moonlighting as a Yakuza enforcer.
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But how does it change his life forever? "Change forever" is a something of a clich?. Running away from an orphanage by itself would change his life forever, might it not? So now he meets a man who claims to be his father: how does that "change his life forever" versus the "change his life forever"Read more
But how does it change his life forever? “Change forever” is a something of a clich?. Running away from an orphanage by itself would change his life forever, might it not? So now he meets a man who claims to be his father: how does that “change his life forever” versus the “change his life forever” of running away from the orphanage?
What is the specific course of his life — aka: the plot — that is a consequence of meeting the putative father?
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