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  1. Posted: May 10, 2015In: Public

    A Nanny is mysteriously directed to the wrong house and is demanded to kill captive children for a soul hungry Entity whose time is running out to earn immortality; she must choose to save the children and escape or be tortured, forever captive with them.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 11, 2015 at 12:12 am

    First you described her flaw as bipolar. Now it's power-hungry. Which is it and why the switch? Why would a nanny be power hungry? And for what? I mean if she were a politician...but a nanny? And I assume this story belongs to the horror genre.

    First you described her flaw as bipolar. Now it’s power-hungry. Which is it and why the switch? Why would a nanny be power hungry? And for what? I mean if she were a politician…but a nanny?

    And I assume this story belongs to the horror genre.

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  2. Posted: May 10, 2015In: Public

    A superhuman woman, that is expected to be a savior of the futuristic world with no energy, needs to be saved by a looser fanboy- though not from danger outside, but rather from her self. Note: This is actually meant for comics(manga) script. Target audience is Y/A. Genre is sci-fi action/drama.

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    Added an answer on May 10, 2015 at 8:16 pm

    Does she want to be a superhero? Why do others expect her to be a superhero? IOW: What is so super about her? BTW: a superhero's flaw/weakness doesn't have to be psychological. The intuitive genius of the Superman franchise is that he was given a physical vulnerability -- to kryptonite -- which sapsRead more

    Does she want to be a superhero?

    Why do others expect her to be a superhero? IOW: What is so super about her?

    BTW: a superhero’s flaw/weakness doesn’t have to be psychological. The intuitive genius of the Superman franchise is that he was given a physical vulnerability — to kryptonite — which saps him of his super abilities.

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  3. Posted: May 10, 2015In: Public

    A Nanny is mysteriously directed to the wrong house and is demanded to kill captive children for a soul hungry Entity whose time is running out to earn immortality; she must choose to save the children and escape or be tortured, forever captive with them.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on May 10, 2015 at 12:28 pm

    As noted. Confusing. Very.

    As noted. Confusing. Very.

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