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Me, Myself & Irene meets Death Defying Acts – "When two young illusionists with multiple personality disorder start dating, they must figure out ?who? will date ?whom’; so their love lives will not self-destruct."
Can two people with split personalities find lasting love when one pair of their multiple personalities are in love while the other pair hate each other?
Can two people with split personalities find lasting love when one pair of their multiple personalities are in love while the other pair hate each other?
See lessAfter discovering he's been raised under an assumed identity, a prized college recruit's championship hopes are threatened by his felonious, on the lam mother when he sets out to find his missing dad.
What Nir Shelter said. Except the working title, "Shot at Faith", and the description of the character as a collegiate hoop jock in every iteration suggest that basketball is a central element to the story. But the dots, the elements of the logline and story, just don't seem to causally connect.
What Nir Shelter said.
Except the working title, “Shot at Faith”, and the description of the character as a collegiate hoop jock in every iteration suggest that basketball is a central element to the story. But the dots, the elements of the logline and story, just don’t seem to causally connect.
See less?An unassuming young gentleman, still struggling to find his place in the world, must face off with the 19th Century?s greatest criminal Kingpin to rescue his childhood sweetheart from a life of sexual servitude and topple the criminal conspiracy which may lead all the way to the Royal Family?
The girl is the stakes character. There may be others who have a stake similar to hers in the outcome of the young man's valiant struggle, but she's the primary stakes character. She's the "casus belli", is she not? It's for her sake -- not for the sake of the others -- that he initially goes into aRead more
The girl is the stakes character. There may be others who have a stake similar to hers in the outcome of the young man’s valiant struggle, but she’s the primary stakes character. She’s the “casus belli”, is she not? It’s for her sake — not for the sake of the others — that he initially goes into action, right?
Ergo, to maintain and increase dramatic tension, keep the audience worrying, it’s better that the fate of the stakes character that was the “casus belli” should be at risk,in doubt until the very last minutes of the story. (If he does save her by the end of Act 2, it’s a pseudo-victory: there ought to be 3rd Act reversal that not only enslaves her again, but also puts the young man’s life in maximum danger.)
Take a plotting cue from Homer (the poet, not the cartoon character) and the epic saga, “The Iliad”. Menelaus led the Greeks in a 10 year war to return the stakes character, Helen, his lawful wife who had been abducted by Paris.. Homer didn’t construct the plot so that he got her back 2/3 of the way through — and then proceeds to conquer Troy to avenge her abduction. Menelaus didn’t get back the stakes character, Helen, until the very end of the conflict, after Troy was conquered and sacked.
Three thousand years later, it’s still the best way to plot a rescue: keep the fate of the stakes character in doubt, at risk, until the end.
So it is probably better to construct the action so that bringing down the entire criminal enterprise becomes a necessary means to the desired end of saving the girl, the only means left after all other options have been exhausted.
That his narrowly focused objective goal — save the stakes character — becomes harnessed to a greater cause and greater good should evolve in the course of the story. He doesn’t start out intending to “save the world”, only save her. Come to find out after all other options are exhausted, he has no choice left but to “save the world” — a much harder task with bigger stakes — in order to save the girl he loves.
fwiw
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