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Only sixteen, Harriet Duncan is determined to bring her mother to justice for her father’s murder. When she happens upon an outlaw with amnesia she struggles to convince him that he?s an heroic bounty hunter who has offered his help.
Having an ally who can be duped into helping her because he's an amnesiac doesn't work for me. She's enlisted the help of a someone obviously not playing with a full deck of cards. Where did she find this guy? Why does she think he could be of any use to her? It seems like a gimmick for the sake ofRead more
Having an ally who can be duped into helping her because he’s an amnesiac doesn’t work for me. She’s enlisted the help of a someone obviously not playing with a full deck of cards. Where did she find this guy? Why does she think he could be of any use to her? It seems like a gimmick for the sake of a differentiating gimmick.
And if I did buy the character, wouldn’t it be the case that what he needs to be duped into believing is that he is an “heroic detective” not an “heroic bounty hunter” — big difference in job descriptions.
I think it would be better that they are both characters playing with a full deck of cards, an Odd Couple who bond over a common need, mutual stakes.
See lessTwin sister detectives – who moonlight as vigilante serial killers – get framed for murder by their criminology teacher, who they (now) must outwit to clear their names.
Good polish by Richiev. Although I think a more interesting twist would be that the murderer is also someone they are closely related to. Like their father. (Who could also have taught them the biz.) fwiw.
Good polish by Richiev. Although I think a more interesting twist would be that the murderer is also someone they are closely related to. Like their father. (Who could also have taught them the biz.)
fwiw.
See lessTwin sister detectives – who moonlight as vigilante serial killers – get framed for murder by their criminology teacher, who they (now) must outwit to clear their names.
Good polish by Richiev. Although I think a more interesting twist would be that the murderer is also someone they are closely related to. Like their father. (Who could also have taught them the biz.) fwiw.
Good polish by Richiev. Although I think a more interesting twist would be that the murderer is also someone they are closely related to. Like their father. (Who could also have taught them the biz.)
fwiw.
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