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  1. Posted: February 14, 2015In: Public

    To fulfill a lifetime dream a terminally ill man heads to the Grand Canyon. On the way he meets a homeless man and helps him reunite with his estranged family instead of finishing his trip.

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    Added an answer on February 15, 2015 at 6:55 am

    What might interest me in the story is not WHAT he does but WHY he does it. Why of all tens of thousands of homeless people in the US of A, of all the homeless people he must surely notice, does he become involved in the life of this one? IOW: what's the so special about the inciting incident? WhatRead more

    What might interest me in the story is not WHAT he does but WHY he does it. Why of all tens of thousands of homeless people in the US of A, of all the homeless people he must surely notice, does he become involved in the life of this one?

    IOW: what’s the so special about the inciting incident? What is there about the encounter with the homeless man that triggers his decision to help this particular person rather than that one? Why would anyone deflect him from his original goal of checking off the Grand Canyon from his bucket list?

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  2. Posted: February 11, 2015In: Public

    A young candle maker with hidden magic powers teams up with an aloof dragon knight to battle monsters in a dark realm while seeking to rescue her twin brother before a sinister sorcerer uses him to activate an ancient weapon.

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    Added an answer on February 14, 2015 at 6:12 am

    Impulsiveness is always a handy character trait to create new problems, but,as Richiev observed, the story seems to have a visual motif of light and darkness. How would impulsiveness fit into that motif? Or do you have another motif in mind?

    Impulsiveness is always a handy character trait to create new problems, but,as Richiev observed, the story seems to have a visual motif of light and darkness. How would impulsiveness fit into that motif? Or do you have another motif in mind?

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  3. Posted: February 11, 2015In: Public

    A young candle maker with hidden magic powers teams up with an aloof dragon knight to battle monsters in a dark realm while seeking to rescue her twin brother before a sinister sorcerer uses him to activate an ancient weapon.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on February 14, 2015 at 6:12 am

    Impulsiveness is always a handy character trait to create new problems, but,as Richiev observed, the story seems to have a visual motif of light and darkness. How would impulsiveness fit into that motif? Or do you have another motif in mind?

    Impulsiveness is always a handy character trait to create new problems, but,as Richiev observed, the story seems to have a visual motif of light and darkness. How would impulsiveness fit into that motif? Or do you have another motif in mind?

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