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A night club owner struggles to control her newfound powers while she battles interdimensional beings who seek to tear a hole in the fabric between our world and theirs.
"Struggles to control her newfound powers" seems negative. Suggest it is might be better to frame it more positively in reference to her objective goal: Like "must learn to use her new-found powers to defeat interdimensional beings tearing a hole in the fabric between our world and theirs..." And whRead more
“Struggles to control her newfound powers” seems negative. Suggest it is might be better to frame it more positively in reference to her objective goal: Like “must learn to use her new-found powers to defeat interdimensional beings tearing a hole in the fabric between our world and theirs…”
And what’s at stake? Why must she battle the interdimensionals? What are the consequences in tearing a hole in the fabric? Why should we in the viewing audience care or worry about it? Does it mean they are trying to destroy our world? Conquer it? Or…?
See lessA 13 year old little brother had grown up around the lives of crooked cops, gangsters,corrupted politicians, a broken family, and a brother who is hated by them all. Will the little fella help his brother, abandon him, or do absolutely nothing?
And who in the cast of the crooked and corrupt is the designated antagonist, the primary opponent who stands in the way of his goal?
And who in the cast of the crooked and corrupt is the designated antagonist, the primary opponent who stands in the way of his goal?
See lessA 13 year old little brother had grown up around the lives of crooked cops, gangsters,corrupted politicians, a broken family, and a brother who is hated by them all. Will the little fella help his brother, abandon him, or do absolutely nothing?
And who in the cast of the crooked and corrupt is the designated antagonist, the primary opponent who stands in the way of his goal?
And who in the cast of the crooked and corrupt is the designated antagonist, the primary opponent who stands in the way of his goal?
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