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In a city where gangs rule the streets and fight each other for food, water, shelter, guns & ammo, and territory. On the outskirts of the city is where utopias of no crime is around, but for how long? These gangsters have been treated like nothing by these politicians, who dump caviar and gold like nothing, they control the police departments, government, and the people. A group of close friends met a police officer who knew how to drive the politicians out of power, but they first had to stop their own city from tearing itself apart.
Who is the main character, the protagonist? Amidst all this anarchy, what is the inciting incident? What, specifically triggers the protagonist into action? What is his (or her) objective goal? An objective goal is a positive statement of what the protagonist wants to achieve or possess. "Drive theRead more
Who is the main character, the protagonist?
Amidst all this anarchy, what is the inciting incident? What, specifically triggers the protagonist into action?
What is his (or her) objective goal? An objective goal is a positive statement of what the protagonist wants to achieve or possess. “Drive the politicians out of power” and “stop their city from tearing itself apart” don’t really qualify as objective goals because they only (vaguely) state what is to be eliminated, not what is to be instituted instead.
See lessIn a city where gangs rule the streets and fight each other for food, water, shelter, guns & ammo, and territory. On the outskirts of the city is where utopias of no crime is around, but for how long? These gangsters have been treated like nothing by these politicians, who dump caviar and gold like nothing, they control the police departments, government, and the people. A group of close friends met a police officer who knew how to drive the politicians out of power, but they first had to stop their own city from tearing itself apart.
Who is the main character, the protagonist? Amidst all this anarchy, what is the inciting incident? What, specifically triggers the protagonist into action? What is his (or her) objective goal? An objective goal is a positive statement of what the protagonist wants to achieve or possess. "Drive theRead more
Who is the main character, the protagonist?
Amidst all this anarchy, what is the inciting incident? What, specifically triggers the protagonist into action?
What is his (or her) objective goal? An objective goal is a positive statement of what the protagonist wants to achieve or possess. “Drive the politicians out of power” and “stop their city from tearing itself apart” don’t really qualify as objective goals because they only (vaguely) state what is to be eliminated, not what is to be instituted instead.
See lessResponsible for the death of his son, a father tries to explain his actions leading up to the tragedy before taking his own life.
Suggestion: why not have him explaining himself on a suicide hotline call? This gives you a dialogue rather than a monologue and an "antagonist", a hotline volunteer whose goal opposes his. Further, hotline personnel are trained to explore and reflect -- not discount, not critique -- their feelings,Read more
Suggestion: why not have him explaining himself on a suicide hotline call?
This gives you a dialogue rather than a monologue and an “antagonist”, a hotline volunteer whose goal opposes his. Further, hotline personnel are trained to explore and reflect — not discount, not critique — their feelings, their emotional pain.
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