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  1. Posted: June 25, 2013In: Public

    Harriet Quimby, America's first licensed female pilot in 1911, said all she wanted was "to be first." She wasn't afraid to die trying.

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    Added an answer on June 27, 2013 at 9:53 am

    A bio-drama of the aviator, I presume. Unfortunately, this story may be caught in the shadow of bio-drama of Amelia Earhart (2009). Which crashed at the box office. It's unfair, but Hollyweirdos will be thinking about and comparing this concept to that movie when they read the logline. The questionRead more

    A bio-drama of the aviator, I presume.

    Unfortunately, this story may be caught in the shadow of bio-drama of Amelia Earhart (2009). Which crashed at the box office. It’s unfair, but Hollyweirdos will be thinking about and comparing this concept to that movie when they read the logline.

    The question in their minds will be: what is there so special about Harriet Quimby’s life that makes it better potential box-office bait than Amelia Earhart’s?

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  2. Posted: June 25, 2013In: Public

    Larry Anglestand, the "Fudge King" is brutally murdered for his homosexuality and opposition to the archaic Blue Laws governing the town.

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    Added an answer on June 27, 2013 at 8:05 am

    I think being murdered for his sexual orientation is central to the story. It's central to Larry's identity and even greater source of internal and external conflict than, hopefully, would be the case in these more temperate times. And it seems more credible that he would be murdered for his sexualRead more

    I think being murdered for his sexual orientation is central to the story. It’s central to Larry’s identity and even greater source of internal and external conflict than, hopefully, would be the case in these more temperate times.

    And it seems more credible that he would be murdered for his sexual orientation than because he fought to abolish the blue laws in his state.

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  3. Posted: June 25, 2013In: Public

    1965. A twin teenager is raped and murdered on the beach. The first female cop of the force solves the crime but fails to connect the lines between the sisters.

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    Added an answer on June 27, 2013 at 5:21 am

    >>but fails to connect the lines between the sisters. What difference does it make? The cop solved the crime -- the objective goal, didn't she? What's the dramatic problem created by the failure to connect the twins? What MUST she do now? What's at stake?

    >>but fails to connect the lines between the sisters.

    What difference does it make? The cop solved the crime — the objective goal, didn’t she? What’s the dramatic problem created by the failure to connect the twins?

    What MUST she do now? What’s at stake?

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