1. Posted: June 26, 2013In:

    Determined and short of money, a young boy aims to swim and fly to his dream paradise on the wildest island of Tasmania.

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    Good point. Distance to be traveled as a measure of the boy's passion and commitment.

    Good point. Distance to be traveled as a measure of the boy’s passion and commitment.

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  2. Posted: June 25, 2013In:

    Larry Anglestand, the "Fudge King" is brutally murdered for his homosexuality and opposition to the archaic Blue Laws governing the town.

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    Yep. So what's the better bait for the hook? The conflicts that arise from his homosexuality? Or the conflicts that arise from trying to repeal the blue laws?

    Yep.

    So what’s the better bait for the hook? The conflicts that arise from his homosexuality? Or the conflicts that arise from trying to repeal the blue laws?

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  3. Posted: June 25, 2013In:

    Ebabe makes a living "doing Ebay." She discovers that Ebay is not what you think it is. Her life has now become an "Eventure."

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    What's Ebabe's central dramatic problem? Whose (or what) is her antagonist? What's her objective goal? What's at stake? Is there/ could there be a ticking clock?

    What’s Ebabe’s central dramatic problem?
    Whose (or what) is her antagonist?
    What’s her objective goal?
    What’s at stake?
    Is there/ could there be a ticking clock?

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