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  1. Posted: August 29, 2020In: Drama

    A high school student becomes an unwitting pawn in a game between two teachers, and she must find a way to outwit them in order for her to get accepted to university.

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    Added an answer on August 31, 2020 at 5:48 am

    As mrliteral and Richiev said. If she's an unwitting pawn, then how does she know she has to outwit them?

    As mrliteral and Richiev said.

    If she’s an unwitting pawn, then how does she know she has to outwit them?

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  2. Posted: August 30, 2020In: Comedy

    A bored Barista becomes a teacher at a school in the town of Homewardsboundsville MO, where students with special abilities are being tested on. He not only has to navigate the strange characters and environment but figure out how to stop the downfall of this generation of mankind.

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    Added an answer on August 31, 2020 at 5:41 am

    As thedarkhorse said. And what is so special about the "special abilities" that all of them are in danger of some kind of "downfall". It's not clear what the problem is nor what, specifically, he must do about .

    As thedarkhorse said.

    And what is so special about the “special abilities” that all of them are in danger of some kind of “downfall”. It’s not clear what the problem is nor what, specifically, he must do about .

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  3. Posted: August 30, 2020In: SciFi

    When tragedy befalls a prehistoric teen, he must join forces with a mysterious ally to unite humanity and overcome an extraterrestrial threat that could end all life on earth.

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    Added an answer on August 30, 2020 at 8:39 am

    The explanation is more interesting than the logline. That's where the story hook seems to lie. In BCE, an alien race has "domesticated" feral homo sapiens like humans domesticated dogs from wolves. And for what nefarious purpose? I mean, if dogs aren't complaining, got a good deal out of the the arRead more

    The explanation is more interesting than the logline. That’s where the story hook seems to lie. In BCE, an alien race has “domesticated” feral homo sapiens like humans domesticated dogs from wolves.

    And for what nefarious purpose? I mean, if dogs aren’t complaining, got a good deal out of the the arrangement, why *must* homo sapiens rebel?

    And tragedy is a vague term. It could refer to any number of unhappy events. And in a logline, a word that could refer to any number of things means nothing at all.

    Be specific.

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