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  1. Posted: October 30, 2018In: Fantasy

    After being discharged for unauthorized actions, the wolf soldier works as a security guard for a rich CEO until he is ordered to take down a terrorist group in his hometown hellbent on destroying the Queen.

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    Added an answer on October 30, 2018 at 2:41 am

    Who orders him?If he were working for anyone else than the CEO, would he get "the call" to take down the terrorist group?? If so, then the CEO is an incidental not a causal factor and doesn't need to be mentioned in the logline.Every element in a logline? must be a necessary link in a cause-and-effeRead more

    Who orders him?

    If he were working for anyone else than the CEO, would he get “the call” to take down the terrorist group?? If so, then the CEO is an incidental not a causal factor and doesn’t need to be mentioned in the logline.

    Every element in a logline? must be a necessary link in a cause-and-effect chain of events.

    And why is he getting “the call” anyway — a man with a blemished past?

    And doesn’t “destroying the Queen” mean the group wants to assassinate her?? Then say so.? Tell it like it is. Be specific.

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  2. Posted: October 28, 2018In: Fantasy

    After Mankind’s potential for good, The Son of the Devil, in defiance of his father, arrives in Los Angeles to send the supernatural creatures back to hell before they take over the city and find the hole in the Gateway before they take over the world.

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    Added an answer on October 28, 2018 at 11:32 pm

    As Richiev said.? Why should he not want his own kind? to take over the world?? They are his own kind, aren't they?? What does "supernatural creatures" refer to?

    As Richiev said.? Why should he not want his own kind? to take over the world?? They are his own kind, aren’t they?? What does “supernatural creatures” refer to?

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  3. Posted: October 27, 2018In: SciFi

    Set in the year 2050: When he wakes up out of his coffin to discover that Transylvania has become an Orwellian fascist state, Count Dracula must lead a rebellion and take them down before they uncover his true identity.

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    Added an answer on October 28, 2018 at 4:14 am

    As noted by Mandavirmais, the premise raises numerous backstory questions that have to be answered before the plot can move forward.? Before the plot even makes sense.

    As noted by Mandavirmais, the premise raises numerous backstory questions that have to be answered before the plot can move forward.? Before the plot even makes sense.

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