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A group of sister have a lengthy conversation trying to fill in the social, cultural and physiological blanks about a long extinct species: Humans.
The logline lacks a plot.And if the sisters aren't human? then what are they?
The logline lacks a plot.
And if the sisters aren’t human? then what are they?
See lessStrange people in a foreign land with no constitutional rights, these Irish gypsies learn the hard way that the criminal can become the crime victim!
>>>learn the hard way Loglines are not about lessons learned.? Loglines are about the action a protagonist takes to achieve a specific objective goal. Who is the protagonist? What is his or her objective goal? (If you have not already done so, please review the? guidelines under "Our formulRead more
>>>learn the hard way
Loglines are not about lessons learned.? Loglines are about the action a protagonist takes to achieve a specific objective goal.
Who is the protagonist?
What is his or her objective goal?
(If you have not already done so, please review the? guidelines under “Our formula” at the top of the page for constructing an industry standard logline.)
See lessWhen a young man is tormented by the spirit of his dead father telling him his mother will die because of him, he tries to find out more about his death.
>>>he tries to find out more about his death.That may be a means to an end, to achieving his objective goal -- but it doesn't qualify as an objective goal.What is his objective goal in digging up the dirt about his father's death?? And why does achieving it depend on his finding out more abRead more
>>>he tries to find out more about his death.
That may be a means to an end, to achieving his objective goal — but it doesn’t qualify as an objective goal.
See lessWhat is his objective goal in digging up the dirt about his father’s death?? And why does achieving it depend on his finding out more about how his father died?
What’s the cause and effect relationship between the tormenting spirit and the need to know how his father died?