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  1. Posted: July 15, 2020In: Family

    When a deadly wave of Coronavirus disables most of the United States and his wife, the workaholic President must retreat to a secluded area and raise his six-year-old son alone while guiding the entire nation. In the process he learns that the former task may be harder than the latter.

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    Added an answer on July 15, 2020 at 8:49 pm

    Agree with Scott Danzig on the issue of gender and race of the protagonist. Time for more "woke" writing.

    Agree with Scott Danzig on the issue of gender and race of the protagonist. Time for more “woke” writing.

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  2. Posted: July 12, 2020In: Examples

    When a sentient video game character falls in love with the real-life player, she must get rid of the other characters to gain the player’s affections, even if that means rewriting the game script.

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    Added an answer on July 14, 2020 at 7:50 am

    What about something like: When a sentient *avatar* in a video war game falls in love with the real life character, she must win his love before he discards her for a new avatar? Or make them both male, or both female, or the real life person is transgender-- lots of possibilities. fwiw

    What about something like:

    When a sentient *avatar* in a video war game falls in love with the real life character, she must win his love before he discards her for a new avatar?

    Or make them both male, or both female, or the real life person is transgender– lots of possibilities.

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: July 2, 2020In: Noir

    Missing – A broken undercover cop and rookie detective are transferred into missing persons. During investigating a missing woman they discover links to one of his old undercover cases and a cover up by his former handler.

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    Replied to answer on July 12, 2020 at 10:38 am

    >>>Torn between loyalty to his undercover past and doing the right thing a broken ex-uncover cop joins missing persons. Law enforcement is a top-down, quasi-military institution. Cops can't join a particular unit or task force simply because they want to. They have to request to work in a uRead more

    >>>Torn between loyalty to his undercover past and doing the right thing a broken ex-uncover cop joins missing persons.

    Law enforcement is a top-down, quasi-military institution. Cops can’t join a particular unit or task force simply because they want to. They have to request to work in a unit or task force. Where they work is up to people who outrank them.

    And the dilemma he faces would be between loyalty to his undercover *partners* or loyalty to his oath. Which is a very real, not uncommon dilemma cops face because of the strong bonds that form among officers, bonds formed by life-or-death situations. You depend on your partner to cover your back .

    And it’s still unclear what the dramatic problem is, what is at stake. The cover up could be about a 101 different crimes. Which one is it?

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