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After her student goes missing, the teacher in-charge sets up a “search and rescue” with his best friends before their field trip ends.
>>>The missing kid (a mischief adventurer type)... Your elaboration makes me wonder:? who is driving the plot, the kid or the teacher?? If the kid, then he should be designated the protagonist; the logline should be framed from his pov.? He certainly seems to me to be a more interesting chaRead more
>>>The missing kid (a mischief adventurer type)…
Your elaboration makes me wonder:? who is driving the plot, the kid or the teacher?? If the kid, then he should be designated the protagonist; the logline should be framed from his pov.? He certainly seems to me to be a more interesting character than the teacher.
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See lessAfter her student goes missing, the teacher in-charge sets up a “search and rescue” with his best friends before their field trip ends.
Agree with Foxtrot25.? It makes no sense why the teacher should take the lead in the search operation until we understand the context, and we don't get that must-know piece of information until the end of the story.Also, the ticking clock ("before their field trip ends") really isn't one.? Because iRead more
Agree with Foxtrot25.? It makes no sense why the teacher should take the lead in the search operation until we understand the context, and we don’t get that must-know piece of information until the end of the story.
Also, the ticking clock (“before their field trip ends”) really isn’t one.? Because if she can’t locate him by the end of the field trip, that doesn’t mean the search is over.? Obviously, she’s going to stay around and escalate by calling in the local cops, etc.
Finally, I don’t see anything unique in the logline.? Of course, it’s a crisis when a kid goes missing.? But kids get lost all the time, every day — what makes this one stand out?? What is so special about this scenario that is worth investing the time and ticket price to watch?? Especially compared to real life search and rescue operations like the one on Easter Sunday in the Los Angeles for a kid who plunged into a drainage pipe system.
See lessThe true story of how a notorious Jewish counterfeiter saved his life by cooperating with the Nazis in the largest counterfeiting scheme in history.
>>>>The true story of how a Jewish counterfeiter trades his services for freedom from the Nazi war machine. Except it's not a trade in terms that he's free to walk away from the scheme.? He has no choice:? It's help the Nazi's or go to the gas chambers.? It's do or die.? And freedom is nRead more
>>>>The true story of how a Jewish counterfeiter trades his services for freedom from the Nazi war machine.
Except it’s not a trade in terms that he’s free to walk away from the scheme.? He has no choice:? It’s help the Nazi’s or go to the gas chambers.? It’s do or die.? And freedom is not an option as a carrot dangled out in front of him..? The best he can hope for is to? merely survival from one day to the next — for as long as the Nazis need his skills.
Of course, he does gain (not win) his freedom.? Thanks to the Allies defeating Germany, not because of Nazis beneficence.
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