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  1. Posted: February 3, 2018In: Heist

    When the end of an abusive relationship sends an isolated college student reeling, she struggles to regain confidence by participating in a legendary campus tradition: stealing the hands from the campus clocktower.

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    Added an answer on February 4, 2018 at 4:09 am

    Agree with Foxtrot25.??That it's a tradition implies there can't be much jeopardy or effort to pull of the heist.? What is the source of dramatic tension?? What is there for an audience to worry about? Or for an audience to care whether she succeeds?? The heist is a pathetic remedy for what ails herRead more

    Agree with Foxtrot25.??That it’s a tradition implies there can’t be much jeopardy or effort to pull of the heist.? What is the source of dramatic tension?? What is there for an audience to worry about?

    Or for an audience to care whether she succeeds?? The heist is a pathetic remedy for what ails her, absurd and immature.? Why should an audience want to root for her to succeed?

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  2. Posted: February 3, 2018In: SciFi

    An orphan developing strange powers is unaware that an alien force needs to destroy her if they are to succeed in invading Earth

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    Added an answer on February 3, 2018 at 8:10 am

    The logline sets up a? situation for a plot.? Now it needs to follow through with the plot that results from the situation.?What must the orphan do about the jeopardy she will eventually realize she is in?? As the designated protagonist what becomes her objective goal?

    The logline sets up a? situation for a plot.? Now it needs to follow through with the plot that results from the situation.?What must the orphan do about the jeopardy she will eventually realize she is in?? As the designated protagonist what becomes her objective goal?

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  3. Posted: January 29, 2018In: Comedy

    A ruined indie scriptwriter decides to crash in a plane against the Hollywood sign. At the last moment he repents and jumps out of the plane. He falls into the pool of a mansion and inside discovers a famous writer of commercial success dead, he immediately decides to take advantage of his name

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    Added an answer on February 2, 2018 at 11:49 pm

    >>>>?I have to know more about the business in Hollywood before trying to write something like this, Write it after you sell your script about the kid who forms the club to get revenge? on the bullies.? Then you'll be on the inside, know how the business operates. >>The agent couldRead more

    >>>>?I have to know more about the business in Hollywood before trying to write something like this,

    Write it after you sell your script about the kid who forms the club to get revenge? on the bullies.? Then you’ll be on the inside, know how the business operates.

    >>The agent could be the one who has the idea of impersonating his dead client.

    Because the deceased recluse writer was the agent’s meal ticket, the only money making client he had.? The agent is a failure, too.? Which makes him desperate enough to go along with the ruse.

    fwiw

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