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  1. Posted: September 26, 2016In: Thriller

    ‘When a mentally ill patient refuses to leave his home, a probationary constable discovers her training could never prepare her for the deadly lesson she?s about to face.’

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on September 26, 2016 at 1:18 pm

    As Dkpough1 said.It's still not clear as to what the jeopardy is, what is at stake. ?What exactly is the "fatal ending" she is trying to prevent? ?A suicide, a homicide?

    As Dkpough1 said.

    It’s still not clear as to what the jeopardy is, what is at stake. ?What exactly is the “fatal ending” she is trying to prevent? ?A suicide, a homicide?

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  2. Posted: September 26, 2016In: Adventure

    When an mysterious artifact appears on the black market, a pair of dealers must outsmart the criminals of the city’s underworld in order to attain it.

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    Added an answer on September 26, 2016 at 1:13 pm

    What's so special about the "mysterious artifact" that it makes it so desirable that it becomes a McGuffin everyone covets? ?IOW: what's at stake? What is gained by possessing it? ?Lost by failing to acquire it?

    What’s so special about the “mysterious artifact” that it makes it so desirable that it becomes a McGuffin everyone covets? ?IOW: what’s at stake? What is gained by possessing it? ?Lost by failing to acquire it?

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  3. Posted: September 22, 2016In: Thriller

    sorry… just wanted to delete and couldn’t see how…

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    Added an answer on September 26, 2016 at 8:33 am

    The revision still does not indicate a plot. ?What does ?"create a monster" mean in terms of dramatic action?So he's unhappy ?What do those negative emotions, grief and rage, trigger him to do? ?What he wants to do about the fact that his father is out and the stripper has gone missing? ?What becomeRead more

    The revision still does not indicate a plot. ?What does ?”create a monster” mean in terms of dramatic action?

    So he’s unhappy ?What do those negative emotions, grief and rage, trigger him to do? ?What he wants to do about the fact that his father is out and the stripper has gone missing? ?What becomes his (singular) objective goal??

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