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In the future, all mental Illness is illegal. After a teen?s girlfriend is taken away due to early detection of a mental defect, he searches to find an error with the brain scanning machine but uncovers a dark secret.
What Nir Shelter said. ?What become his objective goal when he finds the error? ?What must he do about it?
What Nir Shelter said. ?What become his objective goal when he finds the error? ?What must he do about it?
See lessA rebellious teen?s family goes missing. During her search for them, she uncovers a government conspiracy to end all religion.
I still ?am unable to buy the the premise that the protagonist is the 1st one to discover a government plot to suppress all religion. ?That doesn't make sense. ?In every instance in history where a government set out to suppress religion, everyone darn well knew about it.What's the trick that enableRead more
I still ?am unable to buy the the premise that the protagonist is the 1st one to discover a government plot to suppress all religion. ?That doesn’t make sense. ?In every instance in history where a government set out to suppress religion, everyone darn well knew about it.
What’s the trick that enables the big bad government in this scenario to suppress all religions ?– and no one knows about it until the kid stumbles upon it.
But, if I could buy into the premise, what becomes the teen’s objective goal when he discovers it? ?What must he do about it?
And since he’s a rebellious teen, the logical conclusion is that he isn’t scrupulous about walking the strait and narrow path of righteousness himself. ?So why would he care if all religion is being suppressed? What are the personal stakes for him?
See lessSlated for Banishment on her sixteenth birthday, a young warrior must elude capture, rescue her best friend and hope her own twist doesn?t mutate further in the process. If they do manage to escape, Keira will have to face her nightmares, the creatures of a world twisted by the DNA Wars, and survive long enough to reach the City of Lights where she will be free from persecution.
At 68 words this is too long to be considered a logline and has way too many plot points to properly evaluate.Please read the guidelines under "Training" at the top of the web page for composing an industry acceptable logline and shorten and simplify.
At 68 words this is too long to be considered a logline and has way too many plot points to properly evaluate.
Please read the guidelines under “Training” at the top of the web page for composing an industry acceptable logline and shorten and simplify.
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