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  1. Posted: August 27, 2016In: Drama

    During WWII, a segregated all Japanese Regimen, is forced to join forces with an all-Black Regimen on an impossible mission to save the racist General who trained them.

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    Added an answer on August 27, 2016 at 9:55 pm

    It would strengthen the marketability of the concept if it were based on or at least "inspired by" ?a real historical incident. ?Like "Windwalkers" (2002) which was based on the actual historical fact that by speaking in their native tongue, Navajo radio techs provided a way of broadcasting militaryRead more

    It would strengthen the marketability of the concept if it were based on or at least “inspired by” ?a real historical incident. ?Like “Windwalkers” (2002) which was based on the actual historical fact that by speaking in their native tongue, Navajo radio techs provided a way of broadcasting military intelligence that the Japanese could not decrypt.

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  2. Posted: August 27, 2016In: Family

    A rebellious teen?s family goes missing. During her search for them, she uncovers a government conspiracy to end all religion.

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    Added an answer on August 27, 2016 at 9:48 pm

    I myself am unable to suspend disbelief in the premise that a government could suppress all religion as a conspiracy, a covert plot that no one knows about until the teen discovers it.

    I myself am unable to suspend disbelief in the premise that a government could suppress all religion as a conspiracy, a covert plot that no one knows about until the teen discovers it.

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  3. Posted: August 27, 2016In: Drama

    A reclusive but brilliant inventor takes on, and beats Thomas Edison in the race to electrify America, but loses his sanity and wealth along the way.

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    Added an answer on August 27, 2016 at 9:32 pm

    Historical dramas and biopics are the exceptions to the rule that characters shouldn't be name in the logline. ? If you identify the rival to the main character by name, then you ought to name the main character as well. ?I presume this is is based upon the life story of the eccentric genius NikolaRead more

    Historical dramas and biopics are the exceptions to the rule that characters shouldn’t be name in the logline. ? If you identify the rival to the main character by name, then you ought to name the main character as well. ?I presume this is is based upon the life story of the eccentric genius Nikola Tesla. ? So a possible logline might be:

    The true story of Nikola Tesla ?the brilliant and reclusive genius who beat Thomas Edison in the race to electrify America only to lose his sanity and wealth.
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    The true story has the makings of compelling drama. So much so, that there are currently 2 announced movies in the works on ?his life and rivalry with Edison. ? One of them is based upon the historical novel “The Last Days of Night” which was optioned for a movie before the book was even published. The book was written Graham Moore who won the best screenplay Oscar for “The Imitation Game”. ? And he’s likely to script the movie.

    So there’s that, unfortunately.

    fwiw

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