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  1. Posted: August 26, 2016In: Comedy

    [Revisedx2] For refusing to buy more catnip, a vengeful cat calls upon the dark arts to end an insensitive mother’s career.

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    Added an answer on August 26, 2016 at 11:50 pm

    Currently the proposed story line seems to require a lot of exposition to make sense. ?And the hard reality is that attention spans are shorter these days because there are so many media outlets competing for attention. ?Viewers don't have the time, don't have the patience for complicated explanatioRead more

    Currently the proposed story line seems to require a lot of exposition to make sense. ?And the hard reality is that attention spans are shorter these days because there are so many media outlets competing for attention. ?Viewers don’t have the time, don’t have the patience for complicated explanations, ?or lengthy set ups.

    >>>And I?m wondering if the notion of a cat using magic strikes people as funny or not.

    Before people can thinks it’s funny, they have to suspend disbelief and buy into the idea that a cat can cast spells. ?And my mind hasn’t cleared that hurdle.

    >>a more relatable human story involving something like a tortured girl fighting back…

    Yes, I ?suggest refocusing ?the story on a human character and predicament that a human audience can relate to.

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  2. Posted: August 26, 2016In: Comedy

    After a newly engaged woman realizes she has no friends to invite to her wedding, she sets out to make some adult friendships while balancing a crappy job and her own awkwardness.

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    Added an answer on August 26, 2016 at 1:04 pm

    Yes, what differentiates this story from "I Love You Man" other than the protagonist is a woman? ?Seems like a similar, too similar, predicament.

    Yes, what differentiates this story from “I Love You Man” other than the protagonist is a woman? ?Seems like a similar, too similar, predicament.

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  3. Posted: August 23, 2016In: Examples

    An aging radical’s suicide reunites seven of his college cohorts to mourn and reflect on the gap between their youthful ideals and their middle-aged conformity.

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    Added an answer on August 26, 2016 at 8:42 am

    One thing I think this film does particularly well is that everyone in the ensemble has a common bond, a shared past, ?their radical days in college. ?And all the individual story threads are triggered by the same inciting incident, the death of their friend. ?There is an underlying unity to the divRead more

    One thing I think this film does particularly well is that everyone in the ensemble has a common bond, a shared past, ?their radical days in college. ?And all the individual story threads are triggered by the same inciting incident, the death of their friend. ?There is an underlying unity to the diverse characters and story lines.

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