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  1. Posted: August 27, 2016In: Drama

    A dangerous serial killer is the only survivor in a plane crash, when she was transported to a different prison, she is rescued by tibetans from remote high mountain village. After being treated from her injuries she faces a choice to leave the village or to merry 7 brothers of a family who took care of her, according to their matriarchal tradition.

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    Added an answer on August 28, 2016 at 10:00 pm

    Agree with FFF. ?Plots are not about deciding to make a choice. ?Plots are about what happens after a choice is made to pursue an objective goal. ? What does she want in this situation? ?What does she do to get what she wants?

    Agree with FFF. ?Plots are not about deciding to make a choice. ?Plots are about what happens after a choice is made to pursue an objective goal. ? What does she want in this situation? ?What does she do to get what she wants?

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  2. Posted: August 27, 2016In: Drama

    A dangerous serial killer is the only survivor in a plane crash, when she was transported to a different prison, she is rescued by tibetans from remote high mountain village. After being treated from her injuries she faces a choice to leave the village or to merry 7 brothers of a family who took care of her, according to their matriarchal tradition.

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    Added an answer on August 28, 2016 at 7:28 am

    That's a radical change of character. ?Seems like you've got a situation in search of an appropriate character. And I don't yet have a ?buy in for the premise of, in effect, a shotgun polyandry as as a drama. ?She's an outsider, so there's that issue. ?Why would the women of the tribe not just compeRead more

    That’s a radical change of character. ?Seems like you’ve got a situation in search of an appropriate character.

    And I don’t yet have a ?buy in for the premise of, in effect, a shotgun polyandry as as a drama. ?She’s an outsider, so there’s that issue. ?Why would the women of the tribe not just compel but force an outsider to marry into their bloodline?

    I can see this as a comedy, okay, ?because comedies have greater latitude to bend the rules or make up ?rules. ?The audience understands and accepts that latitude. It’s easier for them to suspend disbelief and go with the story. ?But as a drama, ?my disbelief is not yet suspended.

    fwiw

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  3. Posted: August 27, 2016In: Adventure

    In an American West ruled by dinosaurs, a young Teddy Roosevelt goes on an expedition into the Yellowstone to hunt one of the last of the great predators, confronting his and his nation’s destiny.

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    Added an answer on August 28, 2016 at 5:50 am

    "In an American West ruled by dinosaurs"??? ?This seems to be more a fantasy-adventure story.And what is ?"one of the last of the great predators"? ?A T. Rex or...?And how does confronting this creature have anything to do with either his or the country's destiny? ?IOW: ?please clarify the stakes.

    “In an American West ruled by dinosaurs”??? ?This seems to be more a fantasy-adventure story.

    And what is ?”one of the last of the great predators”? ?A T. Rex or…?

    And how does confronting this creature have anything to do with either his or the country’s destiny? ?IOW: ?please clarify the stakes.

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