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  1. Posted: August 25, 2016In: Comedy

    [Revised] A manipulative cat uses trickery and the dark arts to exact revenge upon an unappreciative mother, disrupting her big presentation.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 25, 2016 at 1:31 pm

    Is the cat a stand alone character or has she become an incarnation of the daughter? ?Is the daughter acting out her revenge while trapped in the mind-body of the cat?And if so, shouldn't her revenge be not to merely disrupt to the presentation, but to completely frustrate the mother's objective goaRead more

    Is the cat a stand alone character or has she become an incarnation of the daughter? ?Is the daughter acting out her revenge while trapped in the mind-body of the cat?

    And if so, shouldn’t her revenge be not to merely disrupt to the presentation, but to completely frustrate the mother’s objective goal?

    Which is? ?What is at stake in the mother’s presentation? ?What does the mother stand to gain by the presentation? ?A promotion? ?A big pay raise? ? What does she stand to lose if the presentation is a flop?

    And is the cat’s objective goal the right goal? ?And would a viewing audience sympathize with the cat and want her to succeed? ?Or to put it another way: ?what’s so funny about a main character frustrating a hard working woman’s effort to make a living and get ahead in her career?

    fwiw

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  2. Posted: August 24, 2016In: Thriller

    After giving a tape showing a ritual killing to a deputy. Both the tape and the deputy go missing. When he finds more tapes he needs to get them to the police and survive attacks from unknown individuals. PS: small town, he thinks the cops are involved.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 25, 2016 at 8:20 am

    Oh. ?And almost the entirety of the 1st Act is the search for a working VCR to play it, right? :-)Anyway, ?I bet I am not the only one who will wonder about why a tape, not a disc, or video file.??Maybe stipulate it's an "old" ?videotape .Not that I'm asking to know the spoiler, but do you know howRead more

    Oh. ?And almost the entirety of the 1st Act is the search for a working VCR to play it, right? 🙂

    Anyway, ?I bet I am not the only one who will wonder about why a tape, not a disc, or video file.??Maybe stipulate it’s an “old” ?videotape .

    Not that I’m asking to know the spoiler, but do you know how it all ends up, what the final ?Big Reveal, Big Reversal, Final Denouement are?

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  3. Posted: August 24, 2016In: Drama

    A good father and respected police officer is prisoned after he accidentally shot a young child, who was in the driving away robber?s car. He is trying to get his life back with a support of citizens of his city.

    dpg Singularity
    Added an answer on August 25, 2016 at 8:00 am

    The problem with your sweeping generalization, Dkpough1, is the logline stipulates the protagonist ends up in prison. ?Prima facie, as they say in legalese, ?he was charged, tried in a court of law and convicted.Unfairly convicted.Perhaps you find that outcome unbelievable. I don't . ?I just don't sRead more

    The problem with your sweeping generalization, Dkpough1, is the logline stipulates the protagonist ends up in prison. ?Prima facie, as they say in legalese, ?he was charged, tried in a court of law and convicted.

    Unfairly convicted.

    Perhaps you find that outcome unbelievable. I don’t . ?I just don’t see how he can win his freedom from prison — what is game plan is ?–other than relying on his lawyer. ?Which kind of makes the lawyer the pivotal character.

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