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In a dystopic future where humanity is sterile, a disillusioned man must escort the first pregnant woman in 18 years to a safe haven.
>>I haven?t seen this but from what it sounds like this is the motivation. He wants to improve himself.>>>He gets nothing from her saving except the improvement of self.What's at stake is not self-improvement but something infinitely more important, ?the survival of the human race. ?Read more
What’s at stake is not self-improvement but something infinitely more important, ?the survival of the human race. ? He’s escorting to safety the 1st woman ?to give birth 18 years. ?He’s willing to sacrifice his own?welfare, his own life, if necessary, for the sake of the future of the humanity.
What greater and more noble cause can there be?
See less10yr old Ava likes to play with robots, but when a terrorist attack leaves her town devastated, Ava becomes determined to make her robot protect people and make everyone smile again.
So she gets the robot on 24/7 guard duty. Then what happens? ?Is that all there is to the story? ?Deploying a robot to make people feel secure? Or is it to defend the town from the next attack? ?The logline needs to indicate the threat of another attack. ?Otherwise, what's the suspense, what's the sRead more
So she gets the robot on 24/7 guard duty. Then what happens? ?Is that all there is to the story? ?Deploying a robot to make people feel secure?
Or is it to defend the town from the next attack? ?The logline needs to indicate the threat of another attack. ?Otherwise, what’s the suspense, what’s the source of dramatic tension if the attack is just history? ?It seems to me there needs to be an antagonist not just in terms of what happened but also what is going to happen again.
See lessIn a dystopic future where humanity is sterile, a disillusioned man must escort the first pregnant woman in 18 years to a safe haven.
His objective goal is to ?deliver the girl to the off-shore haven, ?In doing so he discovers-- or rather regains -- meaning and purpose to his life that fills the vacuum of his subjective need. ?BUT that is an collateral?consequence -- an unintended pay off of his intentional?struggle to save the giRead more
His objective goal is to ?deliver the girl to the off-shore haven, ?In doing so he discovers– or rather regains — meaning and purpose to his life that fills the vacuum of his subjective need. ?BUT that is an collateral?consequence — an unintended pay off of his intentional?struggle to save the girl.
Loglines are about the primary intentional acts toward objective goals, not?secondary?unintended subjective pay offs.
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