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A corrupt detective with one month left to live tries to make all the wrongs right in a wobbly road to redemption, becoming the cop ? and the person ? he always wanted to be in the process.
Hello, this kind of story could be interesting, but in my opinion you just have the blueprint of the movie, the "intention". Now you should work on the plot and include in the logline some details about the 'wrongs' and the 'rights' of the movie. I would start with "When a?corrupt detective learns tRead more
Hello, this kind of story could be interesting, but in my opinion you just have the blueprint of the movie, the “intention”. Now you should work on the plot and include in the logline some details about the ‘wrongs’ and the ‘rights’ of the movie.
I would start with “When a?corrupt detective learns that he has?one month left to live, ” ? then what happens ?
In the logline, you should not “explain” the story, just “tell” the story (as short as you can).
See lessA self confident hitman relives along a nightmarish night the killing of his last victim.
Hello, I think you just have an initial situation - you should focus on the main action of the movie. "When his last victim appears to him in a nightmare,?a self confident hitman must..." ?then what happens ?
Hello, I think you just have an initial situation – you should focus on the main action of the movie.
See less“When his last victim appears to him in a nightmare,?a self confident hitman must…” ?then what happens ?
When testing a space-time machine, a brilliant young scientist finds herself stranded in space and time searching for a way home after her machine breaks down.
Hello, I think you should give some details about the time and space of the story and explain what kind of action the scientist must perorm to solve his problem.
Hello,
See lessI think you should give some details about the time and space of the story and explain what kind of action the scientist must perorm to solve his problem.