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When a washed up plumber gets abducted by an automated alien spaceship, he must use his particular set of skills to save himself and the planet. (FOR MEETUP)
I like it a lot! But I can't think of it as a thriller. There can be some thrills but your logline promise a certain amount of irony and comedy. It's not just the "washed up", it's the plumber: I can't take it as a full serious hero. To set a thriller tone you should pick a pipeline engeneer, a mineRead more
I like it a lot! But I can’t think of it as a thriller. There can be some thrills but your logline promise a certain amount of irony and comedy. It’s not just the “washed up”, it’s the plumber: I can’t take it as a full serious hero. To set a thriller tone you should pick a pipeline engeneer, a miner, a sewer worker… Why not change the tone of the movie into an action/comedy?
See lessWhen a White House security guard thinks he prevented a Boeing 747 from crashing in to the White House, by killing a supposed hijacker (in front of him) that whispers Allahoe akbar, he is accused of first degree murder and sentences to death. Franz Kafka’s "Der Prozess" meets ?
It's "Kafka" so I don't think the credibility or realism is a problem at all. Kafka trial is a nightmare where a man is accused of NOTHING and sentenced to death just because he refuses to defend himself. The problem I see here is that I can?t see the whole movie in the logline : too much details abRead more
It’s “Kafka” so I don’t think the credibility or realism is a problem at all. Kafka trial is a nightmare where a man is accused of NOTHING and sentenced to death just because he refuses to defend himself. The problem I see here is that I can?t see the whole movie in the logline : too much details about the initial killing and no clues about what HAPPENS in the middle of the movie. If it?s really kafka? that you want to track, you should stress the paradox in the situation as much as you can. Something like A honest but ingenuous security guard kills a terrorist and save the White House, only to find he will be treated as a terrorist and nailed in a kafkian trial?.
See lessWhen the troubled son of a wealthy business CEO falls into heavy heroin abuse, he is taken care of J05HU4, an A.I. who is to help his son come off his heroin addiction only to relate to him during his withdrawals that evolves J05HU4 in the process.
Me too I don't get it. I would say : "An introvert software engeneer delegates the A.I. he's working on to deal with his son's drug abuse, only to find his son needs a father more that a software." Is that more or less what you mean ?
Me too I don’t get it. I would say : “An introvert software engeneer delegates the A.I. he’s working on to deal with his son’s drug abuse, only to find his son needs a father more that a software.” Is that more or less what you mean ?
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