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  1. Posted: March 11, 2015In: Public

    When a broken film critic must find the most ascetic Persan director and persuade him to shoot an unrestrained blockbuster in Paris, he pick the wrong man and have to deal with him to save his career.

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    Added an answer on March 12, 2015 at 7:39 am

    "The author of a fake interview with the master of indie Iraqi cinema is sent to middle east to find the hermit living director and have him shooting a big action movie in Paris. When he realises the man he bought to Paris is actually an impostor he makes a deal with him to fool everyone, only to fiRead more

    “The author of a fake interview with the master of indie Iraqi cinema is sent to middle east to find the hermit living director and have him shooting a big action movie in Paris. When he realises the man he bought to Paris is actually an impostor he makes a deal with him to fool everyone, only to find that the whole movie is a fraud and that he must redeem himself as a film critic to regain his self-esteem.”

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  2. Posted: March 11, 2015In: Public

    When a broken film critic must find the most ascetic Persan director and persuade him to shoot an unrestrained blockbuster in Paris, he pick the wrong man and have to deal with him to save his career.

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    Added an answer on March 12, 2015 at 7:28 am

    I changed the logline trying to make it lore clear, is it any better?

    I changed the logline trying to make it lore clear, is it any better?

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  3. Posted: March 11, 2015In: Public

    After a series of strange events, a young woman concludes that she is a witch with magical powers. Against her will , her family pushes her to undergo psychiatric treatment.

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    I agree with Richiev. In fact, I think the main problem with this logline is that it's only half of a movie. I can't see what the movie is really about. I think you should focus on conflict: the troubled teen (who I assume is the hero) VS the family, or the psychiatrist, or the mental institution...Read more

    I agree with Richiev. In fact, I think the main problem with this logline is that it’s only half of a movie. I can’t see what the movie is really about. I think you should focus on conflict: the troubled teen (who I assume is the hero) VS the family, or the psychiatrist, or the mental institution… For exemple: “After a series of strange events, a troubled teen convinces herself she’s a witch and is put in a mental hospital where she must fight to discover her true nature”.

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