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An unfaithful family man with middle-age crisis becomes the only witness of the assassination of his secret lover while the unknown killer manages to pass it for a suicide.
The new one is very good in my opinion. good job.
The new one is very good in my opinion.
See lessgood job.
An unfaithful family man with middle-age crisis becomes the only witness of the assassination of his secret lover while the unknown killer manages to pass it for a suicide.
It's formally better but maybe less interesting. I was more interested in a story where the main character must chose to go to the police and lose his wife and family, or be quite and let the killer free. Maybe the police start investigating on the main character and thinks he is the killer, so theRead more
It’s formally better but maybe less interesting.
I was more interested in a story where the main character must chose to go to the police and lose his wife and family, or be quite and let the killer free. Maybe the police start investigating on the main character and thinks he is the killer, so the situation becomes very complicated for him.
Besides, to mention a “middle age crisis” is not very compelling, it’s vague, and this kind of detail can be avoided to make?the logline and focus on the real heart of the movie.
“to become obsessed with uncovering the killer” doesn’t produce clear scenes, I can’t?see the main character actually doing something… how can you tell visually the story of an obsession? Chabrol was a master in this kind of plot, I think of “Juste avant la nuit” where the main character kills his lover (very first scene in the movie) and all the movie is about him dealing with his guilt. The logline for this movie could be “when a respected family man kills his lover in a sexual game, he must deal with his guilt in the context of his bourgeois and hyprocrite environment”. ?In a logline like this one I would chriticize
See lessWhen a disheartened pastor?s one-time love turned wild celebrity whirls back into his small town, he falls for her, not knowing if she will be his ruin or his revival.
Hello, "not knowing if she will be his ruin or his revival" doen's mean anything valuable in a logline, you should try to tell what happens.
Hello,
See less“not knowing if she will be his ruin or his revival” doen’s mean anything valuable in a logline, you should try to tell what happens.