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  1. Posted: September 6, 2012In: Public

    Years after his son?s murder, the leader of a vigilante gang trains a new recruit to take over his ?work?, but the young AWOL commando is on a mission of his own.

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    Added an answer on September 6, 2012 at 7:40 pm

    nice input, thanks. His plan is to kill the gang boss who's training him, in return for killing his dad.

    nice input, thanks. His plan is to kill the gang boss who’s training him, in return for killing his dad.

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  2. Posted: September 6, 2012In: Public

    "After his regular blood supply dries up, a pacifist vampire must rob a mobile blood bank."

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    Added an answer on September 6, 2012 at 6:48 pm

    Yep like that!

    Yep like that!

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  3. Posted: September 6, 2012In: Public

    A dishselved ex con single father wins a scholarship , but his fathers killer , ready for his next body of work vowes revenge .

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    Added an answer on September 6, 2012 at 6:44 pm

    Dish selved ... Hmm... Interesting.... For me too many 'fathers' - I suggest giving one another name so we can differentiate...and do we really need to know he's disheveled ? Also the revenge is unclear.. Revenge for what?

    Dish selved … Hmm… Interesting…. For me too many ‘fathers’ – I suggest giving one another name so we can differentiate…and do we really need to know he’s disheveled ? Also the revenge is unclear.. Revenge for what?

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