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A grieving London gangster recruits the tough new boyfriend of his suicidal daughter to help him hunt the killer of his son. But when he discovers her boyfriend is the son of one of his victims come for revenge, he must risk his daughter's life to take him down.
Here's another version with the main antagonist in the logline. The above logline has two other opponents in the logline (opponents in this story are threefold as per Truby). "When an embittered vigilante recruits a tough teenager for his next hit and discovers he's the son of a victim come for reveRead more
Here’s another version with the main antagonist in the logline. The above logline has two other opponents in the logline (opponents in this story are threefold as per Truby).
“When an embittered vigilante recruits a tough teenager for his next hit and discovers he’s the son of a victim come for revenge he must make a choice: abandon his moral code and kill an innocent or pay with his life.”
See lessA grieving London gangster recruits the tough new boyfriend of his suicidal daughter to help him hunt the killer of his son. But when he discovers her boyfriend is the son of one of his victims come for revenge, he must risk his daughter's life to take him down.
Having found a story problem through trying to work out the logline - the hero's goal was twofold and therefore unclear. Here's the latest version: An embittered vigilante looks for a new recruit in time for his next 'hit', but when his wife and daughter uncover his plans he's forced to make a choicRead more
Having found a story problem through trying to work out the logline – the hero’s goal was twofold and therefore unclear. Here’s the latest version:
An embittered vigilante looks for a new recruit in time for his next ‘hit’, but when his wife and daughter uncover his plans he’s forced to make a choice: stop killing… or lose those he loves.
See lessA grieving London gangster recruits the tough new boyfriend of his suicidal daughter to help him hunt the killer of his son. But when he discovers her boyfriend is the son of one of his victims come for revenge, he must risk his daughter's life to take him down.
How's this one: A grieving vigilante, on a cold, calculated rampage to avenge his murdered son, sets out to execute the last man on his suspect list - but when the son of an earlier victim comes back for revenge he's forced to make a choice: kill his target or save his family.?
How’s this one:
A grieving vigilante, on a cold, calculated rampage to avenge his murdered son, sets out to execute the last man on his suspect list – but when the son of an earlier victim comes back for revenge he’s forced to make a choice: kill his target or save his family.?
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