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UPDATED: AN AGORAPHOBIC WRITER WHO WAS FAMOUSLY ABDUCTED WITH HER BEST FRIEND WHEN SHE WAS 13 YEARS OLD, MUST OVERCOME HER FEARS, AND BATTLE A MENACING ENTITY FROM HER CHILDHOOD. IF SHE SURVIVES, SHE CAN FINALLY WRITE THE STORY EVERYONE WANTS TO READ. THE TRUTH.
Advise to remove "overcome her fears" We know she needs to do this with mention of agoraphobia (which, btw is a risky word to use because a lot of folks may not know what it means.) Is this a contained horror? Like in a cabin or something? If so, wise to mention it. Producers often seek these low buRead more
Advise to remove “overcome her fears” We know she needs to do this with mention of agoraphobia (which, btw is a risky word to use because a lot of folks may not know what it means.)
Is this a contained horror? Like in a cabin or something? If so, wise to mention it. Producers often seek these low budget scripts.
I still fail to place what surviving this entity directly has to do with her ability to write her story? Maybe mention the entities motive in this if at all possible?
See lessUPDATED: AN AGORAPHOBIC WRITER WHO WAS FAMOUSLY ABDUCTED WITH HER BEST FRIEND WHEN SHE WAS 13 YEARS OLD, MUST OVERCOME HER FEARS, AND BATTLE A MENACING ENTITY FROM HER CHILDHOOD. IF SHE SURVIVES, SHE CAN FINALLY WRITE THE STORY EVERYONE WANTS TO READ. THE TRUTH.
Don't use the log to list what's happening in the story, use it to tell us what she's up against, how long it can last and what price she'll pay if she fails.
Don’t use the log to list what’s happening in the story, use it to tell us what she’s up against, how long it can last and what price she’ll pay if she fails.
See lessAn agoraphobic writer must revisit her dark past, and battle a menacing presence, in order to survive the night, and reach the most important deadline of her life.
Sadie, You have some irony in place already to build onto. I suggest you visit something unique about this menacing presence. Something that'll give that horror hook to your pitch. Not sure if revisiting her dark past is worth mentioning unless you include some element about it that is relevant to dRead more
Sadie,
You have some irony in place already to build onto. I suggest you visit something unique about this menacing presence. Something that’ll give that horror hook to your pitch. Not sure if revisiting her dark past is worth mentioning unless you include some element about it that is relevant to defeating the presence.
May want to also include what the deadline is.
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