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  1. Posted: May 21, 2017In: Adventure

    When a writer stuck in a survival cycle finds his car’s tank remains full all the time, he sets on a journey around the world, searching for persons he can help in the most impactful way with this newfound gift.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 22, 2017 at 10:42 pm

    Lol, an uber driver who's car never runs out of gas. Super Prius.

    Lol, an uber driver who’s car never runs out of gas. Super Prius.

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  2. Posted: May 22, 2017In: Drama

    Two ex-Navy divers fight both dread and fear as they are commissioned by the War Dept. to dive on the ship they served on, the USS Arizona.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 22, 2017 at 10:39 pm

    The Pearl Harbor-- Arizona has been down for a very long time, so the better setting for this would be a few years after the end of WWII. What this log fails to mention is why are they diving down there? It's not that much of a risk to go there at it's present depth.

    The Pearl Harbor– Arizona has been down for a very long time, so the better setting for this would be a few years after the end of WWII.

    What this log fails to mention is why are they diving down there? It’s not that much of a risk to go there at it’s present depth.

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  3. Posted: May 22, 2017In: SciFi

    When a mission goes wrong a star ship crew are stranded in the distant future where artificial intelligence is consuming the galaxy. Lost in this chaotic realm the world weary captain and his inexperienced crew must form allegiances and negotiate deals with other species which will at times severely test their ethics and values.

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    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 22, 2017 at 10:32 pm

    Chris, the first obvious thing I recommend you mention is the fight to return home. That has to be the ultimate goal for the ship, no? Since you are giving them side tasks to complete, this reads more like a teleplay and not a feature. Otherwise, the antagonistic force of the AI sounds interesting.

    Chris, the first obvious thing I recommend you mention is the fight to return home. That has to be the ultimate goal for the ship, no? Since you are giving them side tasks to complete, this reads more like a teleplay and not a feature.

    Otherwise, the antagonistic force of the AI sounds interesting.

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