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When a Goth Detective is tasked with solving a murder at a very optimistic circus, he must solve the case to be able to escape the happiness.
But why Goth? Wouldn't it be better to identify with something else about tbis guy? Otherwise, this reads way better. Gj.
But why Goth? Wouldn’t it be better to identify with something else about tbis guy?
Otherwise, this reads way better. Gj.
See lessWhen a Goth Detective is tasked with solving a murder at a very optimistic circus, he must solve the case to be able to escape the happiness.
If the MC begins as "goth" and your obj for him is to NOT change, then having him be successful wont allow him to ARC. That's not a good thing. What is really the reasonable ?objective for this detective while he's in the circus environment? I truly hope you have one for him.
If the MC begins as “goth” and your obj for him is to NOT change, then having him be successful wont allow him to ARC. That’s not a good thing.
What is really the reasonable ?objective for this detective while he’s in the circus environment? I truly hope you have one for him.
See lessPlanet Earth is under alien occupation by the Reptilian Armada and their High Commander Rigel, is in search of his future Queen Sasha. Bound by a prophecy; Rigel and Sasha will marry bringing forth a child blending the bloodlines and forming an alliance between both their planets.
cchagans, your logline for the story shouldn't mention character names unless there is an historical reason or they happen to be someone we all know. Instead be sure to use adjectives to describe your protagonist and antagonist. As a human, I don't think I would give a crap about these factions thatRead more
cchagans, your logline for the story shouldn’t mention character names unless there is an historical reason or they happen to be someone we all know. Instead be sure to use adjectives to describe your protagonist and antagonist.
As a human, I don’t think I would give a crap about these factions that have just invaded and captured my planet. I want to root for someone who will drive them away. Otherwise, what’s the point on you setting this story on Earth?
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