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  1. Posted: May 19, 2017In: Horror

    When her mother dies under mysterious circumstances, a resourceful young school teacher must step into her mother’s job at the secluded Winston School for Children and try to uncover the reason behind her mother’s death.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 19, 2017 at 6:20 pm

    Great advice Nir. The usage of the word "Mother" 3 times in a single sentence could be avoided too. After her mother's mysterious death, a daughter takes a job in a secluded school for children hoping to solve the mystery behind the tragedy.

    Great advice Nir. The usage of the word “Mother” 3 times in a single sentence could be avoided too.

    After her mother’s mysterious death, a daughter takes a job in a secluded school for children hoping to solve the mystery behind the tragedy.

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  2. Posted: May 18, 2017In: Coming of Age

    An introverted young actor goes looking for love anywhere he can think of, except himself.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 18, 2017 at 9:50 pm

    Is this the same movie idea as your other post? Seems similar. If so, please try to keep them in the same thread.

    Is this the same movie idea as your other post? Seems similar. If so, please try to keep them in the same thread.

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  3. Posted: May 18, 2017In: Coming of Age

    An idealistic young actor tries to create the world around himself as if it were his own movie.

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    Added an answer on May 18, 2017 at 9:48 pm

    Check the basic elements of a logline and try to add what's missing from yours. Basically add onto what you have already, "and then what must the actor do?"

    Check the basic elements of a logline and try to add what’s missing from yours.

    Basically add onto what you have already, “and then what must the actor do?”

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