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An introverted young actor goes looking for love anywhere he can think of, except himself.
Incomplete logline. This reads almost like a tagline (that which appears at the top or bottom of a movie 1-sheet poster. Write something that explains to me why I should want to dedicate 2 hours of my time to experience your story. Or, even better, why a filmmaker would want to invest in making yourRead more
Incomplete logline. This reads almost like a tagline (that which appears at the top or bottom of a movie 1-sheet poster.
Write something that explains to me why I should want to dedicate 2 hours of my time to experience your story. Or, even better, why a filmmaker would want to invest in making your story (after he buys your script.)
See lessTwo recusant boys have 36 hours to reach the historic return of the first spacecraft to contact alien life after their plan to surreptitiously view it in a friends dorm is obstructed by the boarding schools strictly enforced orthodox precepts.
I still don't get why the landing is perilous to film? People don't usually go a long journey to disprove something they believe in. It ain't natural as they say. They would simply live in denial until someone or something made them see things differently. Just because aliens land doesn't mean the wRead more
I still don’t get why the landing is perilous to film?
People don’t usually go a long journey to disprove something they believe in. It ain’t natural as they say. They would simply live in denial until someone or something made them see things differently.
Just because aliens land doesn’t mean the whole everything in life gets turned upside down. That would be sad if it does.
So, what’s the message of your story? Faith’s are challenged daily, are they disproving an alien hoax before they leave? That would be a real goal within the struggle.
See lessWhen they plot to kill each other the following day, a white supremacist and a black racist rather wake up in each other’s body and must team up and solve the problem or get killed by their gang members.
Interesting collision of genres, yet, both have been done before on their own.? The body switching theme is usually of comedy though. Avoid "get killed by their gang members" and replace it with "get discovered" or something to that less direct effect as like Nindif mentions.
Interesting collision of genres, yet, both have been done before on their own.? The body switching theme is usually of comedy though.
Avoid “get killed by their gang members” and replace it with “get discovered” or something to that less direct effect as like Nindif mentions.
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