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  1. Posted: May 16, 2017In: Thriller

    To avenge his mentor?s murder, an assassin who turned his back on the intelligence world returns, discovers he?s no longer the hunter, but the hunted and has to stop them before they destroy the core principles of the countries founders.

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    Added an answer on May 16, 2017 at 3:11 am

    remove "turned his back on the Intelligence world" How does one do that? He can quit working for the government. Hunter, hunted mentioned in the same line sounds weird too. To avenge his mentor's murder, a former assassin must take down the shadow government he used to work for before they destroy tRead more

    remove “turned his back on the Intelligence world” How does one do that? He can quit working for the government. Hunter, hunted mentioned in the same line sounds weird too.

    To avenge his mentor’s murder, a former assassin must take down the shadow government he used to work for before they destroy the integrity of the country.

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  2. Posted: May 15, 2017In: Horror

    After finding a talisman in England’s most haunted ruin, three young boys awaken the ancient guardian of Berkshire Castle, which is hellbent on adding skulls to its collection.

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    Added an answer on May 15, 2017 at 10:09 pm

    Yet still it fails to say what the great challenge will be to undo this evil and when it must be done by.Everything after the second comma is the problem because it focuses on the guardian's goals and not the 3 boys who I assume are the protags, kinda like The Goonies movie.

    Yet still it fails to say what the great challenge will be to undo this evil and when it must be done by.

    Everything after the second comma is the problem because it focuses on the guardian’s goals and not the 3 boys who I assume are the protags, kinda like The Goonies movie.

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  3. Posted: May 15, 2017In: SciFi

    Noise Control Beta – In a world where to perceive a forbidden noise is the highest crime, a cop whose wife starts hearing it must find its origin in the desperate attempt to save her.

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    Added an answer on May 15, 2017 at 10:02 pm

    So, you mean the government is entirely making this sound up to prosecute those tbey choose. But why? What is their motive? This kinda reminds me of "They Live" premise.

    So, you mean the government is entirely making this sound up to prosecute those tbey choose. But why? What is their motive?

    This kinda reminds me of “They Live” premise.

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