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Two recusant boys have 36 hours to reach the historic return of the first spacecraft to contact alien life after their plan to surreptitiously view it in a friends dorm is obstructed by the boarding schools strictly enforced orthodox precepts.
Reads much better, Nindif. It still feels as though you are trying to stuff too much into a single log. I think lose the specifics and focus on the general. When an alien vessel arrives on Earth, two devout boys challenge their faith with a journey of _____. Now, what is their journey that will fillRead more
Reads much better, Nindif. It still feels as though you are trying to stuff too much into a single log. I think lose the specifics and focus on the general.
When an alien vessel arrives on Earth, two devout boys challenge their faith with a journey of _____.
Now, what is their journey that will fill the 3 acts? What is the real mission that must be resolved before the final curtain? I hope there is one.
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Sorry, but this is not a logline even if read by Yoda on Dagobah.
Sorry, but this is not a logline even if read by Yoda on Dagobah.
See lessTwo recusant boys have 36 hours to reach the historic return of the first spacecraft to contact alien life after their plan to surreptitiously view it in a friends dorm is obstructed by the boarding schools strictly enforced orthodox precepts.
I kind of get this premise a la the movie Contact with Jodie Foster, however, as per the above advice, I agree -- this logline needs to be re-organized. What I fear is a mistake, is to not examine the actual contact with new life, but rather your decision to skip it altogether.
I kind of get this premise a la the movie Contact with Jodie Foster, however, as per the above advice, I agree — this logline needs to be re-organized. What I fear is a mistake, is to not examine the actual contact with new life, but rather your decision to skip it altogether.
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