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  1. Posted: May 11, 2017In: Action

    A female director with an all-female cast and crew filming an action movie abroad must prove to the CIA that her step-daughter, cast as an extra, is not really an ISIS operative before filming wraps or her movie will be shut down and her step-daughter killed.

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    Added an answer on May 11, 2017 at 7:02 am

    This a feature or an episode? The single thing that jumps out at me is that you are advertising mistaken identity as the driving antagonist. That gonna fill an entire movie?

    This a feature or an episode?

    The single thing that jumps out at me is that you are advertising mistaken identity as the driving antagonist. That gonna fill an entire movie?

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  2. Posted: May 9, 2017In: SciFi

    Abducted by unmanned alien research vessel, a short-fused alcoholic plumber must escape their superior technology before it leaves our world forever.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 11, 2017 at 2:52 am

    I assume he uses his "flushing knowledge" from being a plumber to escape into the vastness of the ship. Again, the only idea here that peaks my interest because it's new and ironic.

    I assume he uses his “flushing knowledge” from being a plumber to escape into the vastness of the ship. Again, the only idea here that peaks my interest because it’s new and ironic.

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  3. Posted: May 11, 2017In: Thriller

    Video recordings showing murders and political payoff sent to key intelligence agencies lure a retired operative back, quickly he discover corruption, assassinations tied to a government program so he has to find the one who started it as his associates begin dropping, he has to find this man before they kill him or succeed at destroying the foundation of the country.

    Foxtrot25 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 11, 2017 at 1:11 am

    First off, the FBI investigates murders domestically and the CIA works larger issues that are abroad. It has to do with their power structure. Disillusioned CIA agent reminds me of Homeland. That can be good or bad. All of your elements are very generic and do little to portray anything unique. GetRead more

    First off, the FBI investigates murders domestically and the CIA works larger issues that are abroad. It has to do with their power structure. Disillusioned CIA agent reminds me of Homeland. That can be good or bad.

    All of your elements are very generic and do little to portray anything unique. Get into what the cost is and what specific and unique force (good luck with that in this genre) happens to offer this story.

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