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A disgraced golf prodigy, scratching out a living hustling lessons, fights for the comeback of a lifetime to prove to his son, a gifted guitarist, that he is not a failure, and to keep his fractured family together.
Please, oh please tell me that you aren't flash forwarding a decade later in a golf drama? A tragic mistake? How about an unavoidable mistake to keep us rooting for the protagonist? Sorry, but if the tragic mistake is his inciting incident, you must work that somehow.So, what you need to do is be suRead more
Please, oh please tell me that you aren’t flash forwarding a decade later in a golf drama? A tragic mistake? How about an unavoidable mistake to keep us rooting for the protagonist? Sorry, but if the tragic mistake is his inciting incident, you must work that somehow.
So, what you need to do is be sure to include this antagonist former agent, that’s out to not only ruin him but keep him ruined. But why? I hope you adequately deal with that in your story.
This almost sounds as though it should be told through the eyes of the son, who puts his successful life on hold to help his squandering father out by becoming his caddy for the summer. Now, you draw his son into an unfamiliar world that he must exist in. And seeing him rise back to glory with his son at his side can be a Rocky moment, perhaps.
After the death of his mother, a son puts his successful music career on hold to work as his father’s caddy during his improbable comeback only to find that his former agent opposes their efforts.
Best I got 🙂
See lessA leaky dinghy and fearful speedboat must leave their quaint country bay to help a spoilt tender find her superyacht mothership before it embarks on a worldwide voyage.
The only way I can see this working is animated. Lord Vader (Disney) rules the animation sector with extremely well thought out stories that appeal to wide audience ranges. You really need every aspect of your story ironed out almost flawlessly to compete. Good luck. We have Cars, etc... You can calRead more
The only way I can see this working is animated. Lord Vader (Disney) rules the animation sector with extremely well thought out stories that appeal to wide audience ranges. You really need every aspect of your story ironed out almost flawlessly to compete. Good luck.
We have Cars, etc…
You can call this BOATS 🙂
See lessAfter a deadly missile attack on a U.S. commercial flight, a brilliant but arrogant safety engineer spearheading a revolutionary new anti-missile product investigates whether the defense contractor she works for is responsible for the attack and finds herself the target of an anti-government weapons retailer.
A safety engineer works on an anti-missile product? Kind of a stretch, don't ya think? Now she is turned into an investigator? Lose brilliant but arrogant, that doesn't make me want to root for her at all. The big elephant is the lack of a clear goal and time bomb for her. What are the stakes she isRead more
A safety engineer works on an anti-missile product? Kind of a stretch, don’t ya think? Now she is turned into an investigator? Lose brilliant but arrogant, that doesn’t make me want to root for her at all.
The big elephant is the lack of a clear goal and time bomb for her. What are the stakes she is drawn into and what looming threat happens if she fails her task? Try ramping it up a bit.
After a missile destroys a commercial airplane, a safety engineer realizes that the defense contractor she works for is responsible for the deadly attack. She must then uncover the ____ before ____ happens.
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