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An awkward, young man attempts to dissuade his imaginary friend from accompanying him on a first date, only to find he’s not the only one with an overactive imagination.
The 2nd part of the log should be scrapped. Elaborate more on what the main hurdle of this story will be. As per above, remove the imaginary reveal.
The 2nd part of the log should be scrapped. Elaborate more on what the main hurdle of this story will be. As per above, remove the imaginary reveal.
See lessTo fulfill a family vendetta a lone warrior must transform a helpless and divided faction into a superior force in order to end an aged war.
You have the structural elements in place here. A big problem is that my mind has no idea what time frame to imagine we are in. Is this contemporary? We in the dark ages? This about vikings? WW II? Can you use something else in place of "transform?" Something a bit more risky for the "lone warrior?"Read more
You have the structural elements in place here. A big problem is that my mind has no idea what time frame to imagine we are in.
Is this contemporary?
We in the dark ages?
This about vikings?
WW II?
Can you use something else in place of “transform?” Something a bit more risky for the “lone warrior?”
Lone Warrior is not too great of a play either. If he is truly lone, then why would he bother to help the faction? What’s in it for him.
See lessWhen several soldiers mysteriously die during training, a young soldier learns that his supervisor is responsible for the deaths and must fight to prevent future deaths.
Sounds like something is missing. What kind of soldiers? Is it wartime or not? What sort of final fight will this be?
Sounds like something is missing. What kind of soldiers? Is it wartime or not? What sort of final fight will this be?
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